Thank you for catching those, Sonia. Here is the corrected version. Let me know if anything else needs fixing.Kitty wrote: ↑February 19th, 2024, 6:36 amI agree, the name was probably originally with umlaut.bergmannw wrote: ↑February 11th, 2024, 6:23 pmSection 5 is ready for PL. https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/mymusicallife_05_damrosch_128kb.mp3 30:40
According to the sources I've checked, the clarinetist mentioned on page 72, Muhlfeld, is spelled with an umlaut on the "u." So I pronounced it that way, even though Damrosch (or his editor or his proofreader) left the umlaut off.
This chapter taught me to extremely like Liszt and dislike Wagner I think Damrosch secretely also felt that way, the way he portrayed them both.
Wonderfully narrated, I enjoyed it a lot. Only a few small notes for your consideration:
> at 0:25: actually for the title proper you could use "chapter 5" instead of "section" at this point here
> from 26:44 to 26:47: between "in this book" and "it was not" – the pause of over 3 seconds feels a bit too long, I would cut to under 2 at least
> from 28:03 to 28:05: between "into the beyond" and "the following winter" – also here I would cut a bit more silence, so as not to exceed 2 seconds
> at 30:10: "altogether, I cannot understand why" – you say "although"
> from 30:30 to 30:33: between "of this oratorio" and "end of section 5" – cutting the lengthy silence here as well
thanks
Sonia
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