Thank you for section 17! It's very nicely done, and I hope you're feeling better now. I apologize for the delay in PLing! Here are my notes:
- At the very beginning, could you trim the silence down to about 0.5 to 1 second(s)?
- At 6:01, "
We shan't be poor," I hear "
Why shan't be poor" (p. 259)
- At 10:28, "What is c*nt
but machine-f*cking?" I hear "What is c*nt
by machine-f*cking?" (p. 261)
- At 15:39, "neither for us-selves not
for anybody else," you say "neither for us-selves not
tor anybody else" (p. 263)
- At 15:43, "We're forced to make a bit
for us-selves," you say "We're forced to make a bit
tor us-selves" (p. 263)
- At 17:36, "It's because th' men
aren't men," I hear "It's because th' men
am men" (p. 264)
- At 19:35, "Because when I
feel the human world is doomed," you say "Because when I
teel the human world is doomed" (p. 265)
- At 20:45, "if I've
got one to live," I hear "if I've
thought one to live" (p. 265)
- At 25:04, "
Her sharp breasts rose and fell," I hear "
Het sharp breasts rose and fell" (p. 267)
- At 28:04, "Connie could not help a sudden
snirt of astonished laughter," could you say "Connie could not help a sudden
snort of astonished laughter"? (p. 268) (This is one of the many typos that made their way into the first edition. I had to check a later edition to make sure about this word.
)
- At 33:43, "She felt somehow,
as if he were giving her tit for tat," I hear "She felt somehow,
as he were giving her tit for tat" (p. 271)
- At 34:38, "And we
shall know better
where we are when I come back, shan't we?" I hear "And we
shall know better
when we are when I come back, shan't we?" (p. 271)
- At 35:10, "If only it doesn't bring
her down on my head!" I hear "If only it doesn't bring
fur down on my head!" (p. 272)
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
I haven't mentioned them all now since this would be too many PL notes, but maybe it's something to consider for future recordings.