kianeg wrote: ↑January 5th, 2024, 9:27 pm
So sorry about that. I'm not sure how I should send the correction. Should I send a complete file again with the correction? And, if so, do I use the same file name?
ah yes, please, only correct the spot that I mentioned, then send the complete file with the exact same filename once more. That way the old file gets overwritten by the new file.
Why are more astronauts from Ohio than any other state? Because it’s so bad that they want to leave earth entirely!
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excellent performance, Jim. I would have loved to see you on a real stage in that role. I can mark Act 2 already PL ok.
For Act 1:
> at 0:53: "they scarcely furnish Christian cheer of mind" – you forgot "Christian", I think maybe it would fit well with the character of this mission to have it put under the church umbrella.
excellent performance, Jim. I would have loved to see you on a real stage in that role. I can mark Act 2 already PL ok.
For Act 1:
> at 0:53: "they scarcely furnish Christian cheer of mind" – you forgot "Christian", I think maybe it would fit well with the character of this mission to have it put under the church umbrella.
Why are more astronauts from Ohio than any other state? Because it’s so bad that they want to leave earth entirely!
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well done, Greg. The grumpiness and at the beginning was exquisitly in character, especially the snarling "good evening" Not a nice guy. Then you start shifting subtly with every ghost. Good job.
Just one missed line to insert:
> at about 11:59: missed line: "Ha! and Valentine and his wild brother Orson, too!"