0:00: Opening silence is too long. It should be "0.5 to 1 second", while yours is about 3.5 second.
3:09: The gap here is quite long
6:11: The gap here is quite long
6:53: The gap here is quite long
7:24: The gap here is quite long
7:59: You're missing the ending section. You need to include "End of section 7", and then 5 seconds of silence.
Also, the recording is a little quiet. You should be aiming for 89 dB, and your recording is 83 dB, so you should amplify it a bit.
Didn't know if you saw that this was ready for review. I posted it in another place as well.
0:00: Opening silence is too long. It should be "0.5 to 1 second", while yours is about 3.5 second.
3:09: The gap here is quite long
6:11: The gap here is quite long
6:53: The gap here is quite long
7:24: The gap here is quite long
7:59: You're missing the ending section. You need to include "End of section 7", and then 5 seconds of silence.
Also, the recording is a little quiet. You should be aiming for 89 dB, and your recording is 83 dB, so you should amplify it a bit.
Didn't know if you saw that this was ready for review. I posted it in another place as well.
I don't see a post from you since you submitted the file originally. Will you let me know what the length of the recording is now after your edits?
Jill
