Spot PL for section 4 is OK!Alister wrote: ↑February 12th, 2024, 8:08 am https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/seapowerinthepacific_05_bywater_128kb.mp3 Section 5 - 28:59
And PL is spot corrected.
Section 5 - It's rather chilling to read all about Pearl Harbor in 1919 know what comes 25 years or so later! Just a few notes for edits:
Around 21:02 - heard "this dock has a length of 100 feet..." should be "this dock has a length of 1000 feet..." I also noticed at the start of this sentence, the B (in build) and the G (in granite) sound a little bit distorted. May want to be careful with the microphone positioning to avoid that distortion.
Around 11:57 - heard "the Navy during the last war...." should be "the Navy during the late war..."
Around 9:00 - missing "This official attends to the purchase of coal, oil-fuel and lubricants for the entire service and has charge of the Navy's payroll."