COMPLETE [Play]The Honeymoon by John Tobin - rr

AleeseeyaVO · Post by **AleeseeyaVO** » January 19th, 2024, 1:52 pm

Volante act 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_volante_2.mp3
(09:18)

AleeseeyaVO · Post by **AleeseeyaVO** » January 19th, 2024, 2:53 pm

volante act 3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_volante_3.mp3
(00:32)

AleeseeyaVO · Post by **AleeseeyaVO** » January 19th, 2024, 2:54 pm

volante act 4
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_volante_4.mp3
(02:29)

llamaart · Post by **llamaart** » January 19th, 2024, 3:15 pm

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 19th, 2024, 1:27 pm Hi Allie,
Thanks for the adjustments to the stage directions; I think you've got the hang of it now. PL Okay for acts one and two. For future reference, please leave 5 sec. of silence at the end of the recording. Kelly--please clarify what "u.e." means in stage directions, as I am unsure.

Lora

As an actor I knew most what most of the letters meant, but U.E stumped me. lol

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 20th, 2024, 1:15 pm

Hi Aleeseeya,

PL Okay for acts 3 and 4. In Act 2 at 3:18, please change "counting" to "coming" in "Well, well, I'm coming to it." At 7:51 in Act 2, please change "haunted" to "hunted" in "I am fairly hunted into the toil."

Thanks-it sounds great!
Lora

Post by **ToddHW** » January 20th, 2024, 6:48 pm

I think that u.e. means "Upper Entrance/Exit" - like a door in the center of the backdrop instead of to the left or right.

Thanks, Todd

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 22nd, 2024, 8:24 am

llamaart wrote: ↑January 19th, 2024, 3:15 pm
ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 19th, 2024, 1:27 pm Hi Allie,
Thanks for the adjustments to the stage directions; I think you've got the hang of it now. PL Okay for acts one and two. For future reference, please leave 5 sec. of silence at the end of the recording. Kelly--please clarify what "u.e." means in stage directions, as I am unsure.

Lora
As an actor I knew most what most of the letters meant, but U.E stumped me. lol

Todd is is right. It's Upper Entrance. It's one of those Victorian Era stage notations we rarely use these days.

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 22nd, 2024, 8:26 am

Sorry to be missing in action for a few days, everyone. I'm having computer woes!

llamaart · Post by **llamaart** » January 22nd, 2024, 2:26 pm

Here are the stage directions for act 3.

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_stagedirections_3.mp3 6:58

Best wishes, Allie.

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 23rd, 2024, 6:13 am

llamaart wrote: ↑January 22nd, 2024, 2:26 pm Here are the stage directions for act 3.

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_stagedirections_3.mp3 6:58

Best wishes, Allie.

thanks!

AleeseeyaVO · Post by **AleeseeyaVO** » January 23rd, 2024, 4:41 pm

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 20th, 2024, 1:15 pm Hi Aleeseeya,

PL Okay for acts 3 and 4. In Act 2 at 3:18, please change "counting" to "coming" in "Well, well, I'm coming to it." At 7:51 in Act 2, please change "haunted" to "hunted" in "I am fairly hunted into the toil."

Thanks-it sounds great!
Lora

Fixed those lines!

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_volante_2.mp3
(09:17)

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 23rd, 2024, 6:07 pm

Hi Everyone,
I'll get caught up on the PL for these tomorrow--just wanted you to know.

Thanks,
Lora

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 24th, 2024, 7:11 am

Thanks, Aleeseeya; PL Okay for Volante, Act 2.

L.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 24th, 2024, 7:44 am

Hi Allie,

I hope these notes don't seem too picky, but since reading Stage Directions is new to you, I think they might be helpful.

If you are unfamiliar with an abbreviation or pronunciation, please ask or look it up. You have correctly read the U.E. directions, however, the L.D. (Left, downstage) is missing the "downstage." Also, the pronunciation of "Exuent" (ek-see-uhnt) is important because in contrast to "Exit," it means that more than one character is leaving the stage. Since this is a recording and not a live performance, Kelly will need to determine if you should review the act and make edits.
Here are additional PL notes:

1:07--correct the pronunciation of "Rolando" in "Exuent Count and Rolando."
3:54--please add "him" to "They sit him down."
3:59--change "R" to "L" in the stage direction.
4:42--Add "Duke" before "Puts her over to the R."
4:54--add "goes" to "She goes and opens it."
5:25--please correct the pronunciation of "desists."
5:32--add the missing stage direction "(Aside...sits down R.)
6:07--add R to the stage direction
6:51--add the missing stage direction (Exit Juliana....flat.)

Thanks so much,

Lora

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 25th, 2024, 6:26 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 24th, 2024, 7:44 am Hi Allie,

I hope these notes don't seem too picky, but since reading Stage Directions is new to you, I think they might be helpful.

If you are unfamiliar with an abbreviation or pronunciation, please ask or look it up. You have correctly read the U.E. directions, however, the L.D. (Left, downstage) is missing the "downstage." Also, the pronunciation of "Exuent" (ek-see-uhnt) is important because in contrast to "Exit," it means that more than one character is leaving the stage. Since this is a recording and not a live performance, Kelly will need to determine if you should review the act and make edits.
Here are additional PL notes:

1:07--correct the pronunciation of "Rolando" in "Exuent Count and Rolando."
3:54--please add "him" to "They sit him down."
3:59--change "R" to "L" in the stage direction.
4:42--Add "Duke" before "Puts her over to the R."
4:54--add "goes" to "She goes and opens it."
5:25--please correct the pronunciation of "desists."
5:32--add the missing stage direction "(Aside...sits down R.)
6:07--add R to the stage direction
6:51--add the missing stage direction (Exit Juliana....flat.)

Thanks so much,

Lora

My computer is still in the shop. I may not be able to review this for a few more days.