COMPLETE [Play]The Honeymoon by John Tobin - rr

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » January 16th, 2024, 2:46 am

ktaylor07 wrote: ↑January 15th, 2024, 6:22 am
Oh, yes, please do! Welcome to the cast! :D :D

Here you are: https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_lopez_3.mp3 1:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_lopez_4.mp3 0:57

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 16th, 2024, 7:20 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑January 16th, 2024, 2:46 am
ktaylor07 wrote: ↑January 15th, 2024, 6:22 am
Oh, yes, please do! Welcome to the cast!
Here you are: https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_lopez_3.mp3 1:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_lopez_4.mp3 0:57

That was fast! Thanks!

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 16th, 2024, 8:29 am

Hi Adrian,
PL Okay for Lopez, Act 3. In Act 4 at :11, please insert missing line after the stage direction where the Duke and Juliana enter: "Neighbors...gazers?"

Thanks-sounds great, as always,
Lora

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » January 17th, 2024, 2:40 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 16th, 2024, 8:29 am Hi Adrian,
PL Okay for Lopez, Act 3. In Act 4 at :11, please insert missing line after the stage direction where the Duke and Juliana enter: "Neighbors...gazers?"

Thanks-sounds great, as always,
Lora

Thank you, Lora. Hopefully this will fix it: https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_lopez_4.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 17th, 2024, 6:08 am

Great, Adrian--PL Okay now. Thanks,

Lora

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » January 17th, 2024, 5:01 pm

Here is Balthazar:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_5.mp3

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 18th, 2024, 7:13 am

silverquill wrote: ↑January 17th, 2024, 5:01 pm Here is Balthazar:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_4.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_5.mp3

Thanks! Look forward to listening to this!

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 18th, 2024, 7:22 am

Hi Larry,
PL Okay for acts 1, 3, and 4 for Balthazar.
In act 2 at 3:42 please see if you'd like to rephrase the following: "Read, read it out--And you, if I mistake not, are another!"
In act 5 at 4:05 please add Balthazar's remaining lines, beginning with "Zamora!" and ending with "There--she is yours..."

Thanks,
Lora

llamaart · Post by **llamaart** » January 18th, 2024, 11:01 am

Here is the stage directions for act 1 and 2. I fixed act one like requested.
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_stagedirections_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_stagedirections_2.mp3

I have never read stage directions until now, so please let me know if I need to fix anything!

Best wishes, Allie.

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 18th, 2024, 11:48 am

llamaart wrote: ↑January 18th, 2024, 11:01 am Here is the stage directions for act 1 and 2. I fixed act one like requested.
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_stagedirections_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_stagedirections_2.mp3

I have never read stage directions until now, so please let me know if I need to fix anything!

Best wishes, Allie.

Thanks!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » January 18th, 2024, 12:56 pm

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 18th, 2024, 7:22 am Hi Larry,
PL Okay for acts 1, 3, and 4 for Balthazar.
In act 2 at 3:42 please see if you'd like to rephrase the following: "Read, read it out--And you, if I mistake not, are another!"
In act 5 at 4:05 please add Balthazar's remaining lines, beginning with "Zamora!" and ending with "There--she is yours..."

Thanks,
Lora

Well, I don't know what happened to those closing lines, but here they are, along with the suggested correction to Act 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_balthazar_5.mp3

Thanks for the good PL!

AleeseeyaVO · Post by **AleeseeyaVO** » January 19th, 2024, 9:40 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 15th, 2024, 5:46 pm Hi AleeseeyaVO,
Your reading of Volante is PL Okay but the file needs to be amplified for its volume. When I ran it through the Checker program it registered 63 db or so; 82-89 is the preferred range. Thanks for adjusting.

Lora

sorry about that.

trying again. I also shortened some of the between lines pauses that were more than 5 seconds.
(02:30)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/honeymoon_volante_01.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 19th, 2024, 12:55 pm

AleeseeyaVO and Kelly,
The new file comes in at 88.9 and sounds much better-thanks. Hope that will work.
PL Okay for that section.

Lora

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 19th, 2024, 12:58 pm

Thank you, Larry--those changes are great. PL Okay now, Balthazar, all acts.

L.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » January 19th, 2024, 1:27 pm

Hi Allie,
Thanks for the adjustments to the stage directions; I think you've got the hang of it now. PL Okay for acts one and two. For future reference, please leave 5 sec. of silence at the end of the recording. Kelly--please clarify what "u.e." means in stage directions, as I am unsure.

Lora