FULL[PLAY]The Town Before You by Cowley - thw

[HelloCentral]

Here's Asgill.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_5.mp3

Rick

[ToddHW]

I keep thinking that your role is the evil Nazgul.... Maybe cuz I'm involved in The Ring cycle play. Or just that I like hobbits. Who knows?

Anyway, thank you.

Todd

[HelloCentral]

I keep thinking that your role is the evil Nazgul.... Maybe cuz I'm involved in The Ring cycle play. Or just that I like hobbits. Who knows?

Anyway, thank you.

Todd

I should have used my Nazgul voice for this part. Too late now.

[adrianstephens]

Thank you.

Todd

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_slopseller_3.mp3 0:48
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_firstman_5.mp3 0:39

I suppose every little bit helps :0)

[ToddHW]

Thank you. Don't be bit-ter....

Thanks, Todd

[Kitty]

Here are two bit parts, Buckram Act 1, and Holdfast Act 5
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_buckram_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_holdfast_5.mp3

Holdfast really got frightened in the end, I loved this last performance.

Buckram is already PL ok.

One small note for Holdfast:

> at 0:11: (p. 76) "I have been watching for him the whole day" - you say "watching him for", which changes the meaning

thank you

Sonia

[Kitty]

Here's Asgill.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_3.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_asgill_5.mp3

now isn't he highly dramatic very well played, Rick. I loved all of Asgill's pining and sighing and the overplayed heroism in the end while he was emulating someone like Errol Flynn in his final words. excellent job, and all acts are PL ok.

Thanks

Sonia

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_slopseller_3.mp3 0:48
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_firstman_5.mp3 0:39

I suppose every little bit helps :0)

it more than helps. Two scene-stealing performances I especially liked that rascal slopseller, he sounded quite shifty not sure I would have bought anything from him. Though I have a PL note for this part:

> at 0:39: (p. 56) "and will make a noble sailor" - you say "father"

The man in Act 5 is straight PL ok, thanks

Question for Todd: for this first man you write "Asgill's servant", though I think he is more a sort of police officer maybe. Did you maybe want to put "Asgill's servant" in the section for one of the numerous servants, to differentiate. They are confusing enough as it is.

Sonia

[ToddHW]

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Question for Todd: for this first man you write "Asgill's servant", though I think he is more a sort of police officer maybe. Did you maybe want to put "Asgill's servant" in the section for one of the numerous servants, to differentiate. They are confusing enough as it is.

Sonia

Of course, you are right. Very confusing. I fixed the MW, though it doesn't really matter....

Thanks, Todd

[silverquill]

Holdfast with correction:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_holdfast_5.mp3

Thanks, Sonia!

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[adr6090]

Section 02, please?

[adrianstephens]

> at 0:39: (p. 56) "and will make a noble sailor" - you say "father"



Sonia

Thank you, Sonia. Here is the correction: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_slopseller_3.mp3

[Kitty]

Holdfast with correction:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_holdfast_5.mp3

great edit and now PL ok, thanks

Sonia

[Kitty]

Thank you, Sonia. Here is the correction: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/townbeforeyou_slopseller_3.mp3

perfectly corrected and also PL ok now, thank you. I will miss his rough voice, please recycle it again in another play if possible

Sonia