you technique is very good and as to pronunciation, it's Old Greek names...so we all do our bestadrianstephens wrote: ↑January 25th, 2024, 3:10 amStage directions act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/rudens_1_plautus_128kb.mp3 9:37.
I'm going to hold off on any more acts until I've got feedback. I want to discover if my technique or pronunciation
are so bad I need to do it again.
I was already happy that you didn't forget to mention the dramatis personae
still, a few notes to edit:
> at 0:49: Sceparnio, Gripus, Turbalio, Sparax, servants of Daemones - in fact we need each credit separately: "Sceparnio, servant of Daemones, read by..."
> at 1:19: Palaestra, Ampelisca, young woman in the possession of Labrax - also here, each woman separately
> at about 1:26: you forgot your own credit: "Stage directions read by Adrian Stephens"
> at 1:46: "the subject, etc" - not sure we need this part, let's wait for Todd's answer, but so far we always skipped it because it was a mega spoiler
> at 3:51: "the acrostic argument" - also here, not sure we need that, but let's wait for Todd's reply
> at about 4:39: (p. 66-68) three missed bits: "pointing to the cottage"; "pointing at it" and "exit"
> at about 7:22: (p. 72) missed line: "a pause"
thank you for the fast turn-around
Sonia