PL Notes: Needs to say "End of Part 2, Chapter 1" at the end with 5 seconds of silence
Hi Victoria and Tatiana,
Nick appears to be inactive. I made the correction. Hopefully, it will pass muster. It is in the MW for spot PL.
Section 12 may have to be reopened and orphaned, Victoria. The file can't be corrected since parts need to be replaced.
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
6:12 missing a chunk of the sentence beginning "For a stranger from the remotest part." The reading jumps from the end of the preceding sentence to "is equally treated"
I'm afraid Nicholas is inactive now since January. Please PM him and if he doesn't respond, reopen this one as well.
Edit:
In lieu of doing this as he has only this bit missing and has done so many other great sections, I did my best impression and inserted the bit. It don't think it stands out shockingly. Perhaps it can be used this way. I have heard worse edits! Take a listen and see if it works. https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/gulliverstravels_35_swift_128kb.mp3
11:40
Thanks!
-Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
I'm down for section 12 if you like. You know I love this stuff, plus it's sandwiched between two of my other Swift sections. I know I'm probably missing half of his barbs, but you can sense he's ridiculing SOMETHING or SOMEONE's behavior.
BrizeCrize wrote: ↑May 26th, 2024, 2:56 pm
I'm down for section 12 if you like. You know I love this stuff, plus it's sandwiched between two of my other Swift sections. I know I'm probably missing half of his barbs, but you can sense he's ridiculing SOMETHING or SOMEONE's behavior.
I think we're officially getting near the end of the road on this title. Thoroughly enjoyed it (though I wish I had had more sections in that 'horsey' part - that was completely new to me).
Take a listen and see if it works.