(group/animals) The Percheron horse, by Charles du Hays - lt

[Cbteddy]

Hello! Here is section 1 (7:21).

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_01_duhays_128kb.mp3

[vviera]

Hello! Here is section 1 (7:21).

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_01_duhays_128kb.mp3

In MW and PL OK. Good job!

[Jayjaysil]

Here's section 4.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

[Lynnet]

Here's section 4.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

Thank you

[vviera]

Here's section 4.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

Thanks for your section. Here are the note:

:56
Text: “have been changed”; heard: “have been charged”
Middle of first paragraph

2:34
Text: “admirers of the Arabians”; heard “admirers from the Arabians”
Near the beginning of p. 21.
This is just a tiny word, but it makes the sentence say the opposite. With “of,” the Arabians are being admired. With “from,” the Arabians are the ones doing the admiring.

Your volume, at 92.5, is just slightly outside of the Librivox acceptable range, which is 86-92. Please decrease volume. They say a good number to shoot for is 89-90.

[Lynnet]

Section 2 is ready for PL.

[vviera]

Section 2 is ready for PL.

:18 You say "Part First," omit both the part title and "chapter 1," jumping directly to the chapter title. It seems to me both should be there. What do you think?

[Lynnet]

Section 2 is ready for PL.

:18 You say "Part First," omit both the part title and "chapter 1," jumping directly to the chapter title. It seems to me both should be there. What do you think?

It needs the section number at the beginning, then the chapter title from the second column in the MW. It is incorrect to have the chapter number. Just the section number and the chapter title.

"Section # of The Percheron horse. This is a LibriVox recording. All LibriVox recordings are in the public domain. For more information or to volunteer, please visit librivox.org." [Optional: "Read by your name."] "The Percheron horse, by Charles du Hays. Section Title."

[vviera]

Section 2 is ready for PL.

:18 You say "Part First," omit both the part title and "chapter 1," jumping directly to the chapter title. It seems to me both should be there. What do you think?

It needs the section number at the beginning, then the chapter title from the second column in the MW. It is incorrect to have the chapter number. Just the section number and the chapter title.

"Section # of The Percheron horse. This is a LibriVox recording. All LibriVox recordings are in the public domain. For more information or to volunteer, please visit librivox.org." [Optional: "Read by your name."] "The Percheron horse, by Charles du Hays. Section Title."

Marked PL OK.

[Jayjaysil]

Here's section 4.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

Thanks for your section. Here are the note:

:56
Text: “have been changed”; heard: “have been charged”
Middle of first paragraph

2:34
Text: “admirers of the Arabians”; heard “admirers from the Arabians”
Near the beginning of p. 21.
This is just a tiny word, but it makes the sentence say the opposite. With “of,” the Arabians are being admired. With “from,” the Arabians are the ones doing the admiring.

Your volume, at 92.5, is just slightly outside of the Librivox acceptable range, which is 86-92. Please decrease volume. They say a good number to shoot for is 89-90.

Thanks for the feedback.
Here's the revised version,
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

[Lynnet]

Here's section 4.
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

Thanks for your section. Here are the note:

:56
Text: “have been changed”; heard: “have been charged”
Middle of first paragraph

2:34
Text: “admirers of the Arabians”; heard “admirers from the Arabians”
Near the beginning of p. 21.
This is just a tiny word, but it makes the sentence say the opposite. With “of,” the Arabians are being admired. With “from,” the Arabians are the ones doing the admiring.

Your volume, at 92.5, is just slightly outside of the Librivox acceptable range, which is 86-92. Please decrease volume. They say a good number to shoot for is 89-90.

Thanks for the feedback.
Here's the revised version,
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

Thank you

[vviera]

Thanks for the feedback.
Here's the revised version,
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/percheronhorse_04_duhays_128kb.mp3
7:05

Good corrections! Section 4 now PL OK.

[sjm42]

May I read section 9?

[Lynnet]

May I read section 9?

Certainly

[LG2023]

Hi,
I will read Chapter 5, Conditions under which they are bred.
Thanks,
Larry