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Marina47 wrote: November 27th, 2023, 4:53 pm Here is my edited last section of ghost stories. I apologize for the delay; just read about the time limit for edits and
have been busy with other commitments. I will get my routine smoothed out!

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MorphineLolly wrote: November 27th, 2023, 3:36 pm Edits completed!

40:40

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bestghoststories_05_various_128kb.mp3

i removed some long pauses so the time stamps have been adjusted
please let me know if any further changes are needed.
Hi MorphineLolly,

Most of your corrections are nicely incorporated and the silences are all fine now, but there's still four left:
  • At 9:55, I still hear “…for people declared that the low stipulations of the dead could be heard in the dingy house of God…” That should read “…the low supplications of the dead…”
  • At 10:46, I still hear “His predecessor, almost a centarion in years…” Please change that to “…almost a centenarian in years…”
  • At 29:41, I still hear “Finally she signified by gestations that she could not speak.” That needs to become “gesticulations.”
  • At 35:52, you've added “It was then," but missed the later correction in that sentence. I hear "...when she was seated on the low stool in the seven days of mourning that the rabbi came to her, to bring her the usual consultations of the dead.” Please change that last phrase to: “to bring to her the usual consolation for the dead.”
You're almost there!

Cheers,
Winnifred

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Post by Winnifred »

Marina47 wrote: November 27th, 2023, 4:53 pm Here is my edited last section of ghost stories. I apologize for the delay; just read about the time limit for edits and
have been busy with other commitments. I will get my routine smoothed out!

Duration 32:10


https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bestghoststories_15_various_128kb.mp3
Hi Marina,

Your section is now PL OK!

Thanks,
Winnifred

Readers Wanted:
Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.)
Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
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Post by MorphineLolly »

Winnifred wrote: November 27th, 2023, 5:18 pm
MorphineLolly wrote: November 27th, 2023, 3:36 pm Hi MorphineLolly,

Most of your corrections are nicely incorporated and the silences are all fine now, but there's still four left:
  • At 9:55, I still hear “…for people declared that the low stipulations of the dead could be heard in the dingy house of God…” That should read “…the low supplications of the dead…”
  • At 10:46, I still hear “His predecessor, almost a centarion in years…” Please change that to “…almost a centenarian in years…”
  • At 29:41, I still hear “Finally she signified by gestations that she could not speak.” That needs to become “gesticulations.”
  • At 35:52, you've added “It was then," but missed the later correction in that sentence. I hear "...when she was seated on the low stool in the seven days of mourning that the rabbi came to her, to bring her the usual consultations of the dead.” Please change that last phrase to: “to bring to her the usual consolation for the dead.”
You're almost there!

Cheers,
Thank you! ill get them knocked out in the morning
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edits made .

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bestghoststories_05_various_128kb.mp3

that should be everything.

9:55, “…the low supplications of the dead…”
10:46, “…almost a centenarian in years…”
29:41, “gesticulations.”
35:52, “to bring to her the usual consolation for the dead.”
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Post by Winnifred »

MorphineLolly wrote: November 28th, 2023, 12:33 pm edits made .

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/bestghoststories_05_various_128kb.mp3

that should be everything.

9:55, “…the low supplications of the dead…”
10:46, “…almost a centenarian in years…”
29:41, “gesticulations.”
35:52, “to bring to her the usual consolation for the dead.”
And it is now PL OK!

Cheers,
Winnifred

Readers Wanted:
Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.)
Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
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yay! thank you for your wonderfull PL
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Hello, I would like to try my luck on chapter 13, that should be fun. Can I have it if it's still available?

Thank you!

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TotalEcho wrote: November 29th, 2023, 7:09 am Hello, I would like to try my luck on chapter 13, that should be fun. Can I have it if it's still available?

Thank you!

TotalEcho
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Post by Kitty »

over to readers found then 8-)

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Post by StaceyM2022 »

Hi there,

My due date is this week, but I have been battling a cold and it has affected my voice. May I claim an extension?

Thanks,
Stacey
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StaceyM2022 wrote: December 19th, 2023, 4:35 am Hi there,

My due date is this week, but I have been battling a cold and it has affected my voice. May I claim an extension?

Thanks,
Stacey
That's fine.
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Post by flavo5000 »

Kitty wrote: October 9th, 2023, 11:07 pm sounds like the perfect project for the season. I am surprised it hasn't been done yet. :shock:

I'll MC, MW will be up shortly

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We've had a few sections orphaned. Can we move back to Readers Wanted?
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Post by Kitty »

flavo5000 wrote: December 28th, 2023, 9:25 amWe've had a few sections orphaned. Can we move back to Readers Wanted?
done :)

Sonia
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