[COMPLETE] Ladies Whose Bright Eyes, by Ford Madox Ford - loa

[plotznik]

Here is Section 3 (12:37)

https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_3_ford_128kb.mp3

Thank you for section 3! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed your clear reading style. I have just a few PL notes:

- At the very beginning, could you shorten the silence a bit so that it's between 0.5 and 1 second(s) of silence?
- At 3:08, there's a stumble at "but I wish I could do the gliding step."
- Could you add a 0 before the 3 in the filename? (ladieswhosebrighteyes_03_ford_128kb.mp3)

Thanks for these helpful notes. I think I have addressed them all; hope you agree!


https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_03_ford_128kb.mp3

[Scarbo]

Thanks for these helpful notes. I think I have addressed them all; hope you agree!


https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_03_ford_128kb.mp3

Yes, PL OK! Thank you!

[plotznik]

Hello,

I would like to claim section 10 please.

Thanks,
John

[Scarbo]

Hello,

I would like to claim section 10 please.

Thanks,
John

It's all yours! Thank you for claiming!

[brownrottger]

Section 5 37:30 https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_05_ford_128kb.mp3

[plotznik]

Section 10 (32:24)


https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_10_ford_128kb.mp3

[Scarbo]

Section 5 37:30 https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_05_ford_128kb.mp3

Thank you for section 5! It's very nicely done, and I appreciate your measured reading pace. I have just a few notes:

- At 9:29, "who had fallen on Sir John of Hainault and his fellows as they went back at night from the King’s lodgings to their own," you say "who had fallen on Sir John of Hainault and his friends as they went back at night from the King’s lodgings to their own"
- At 11:24, there's a repeat of "'Why, ask her,' the Lady Blanche said. 'I am tired of the sound of my own voice.'"
- At 22:04, "one comes trotting along the path," it sounds as though part of "trotting" has been cut out
- At 22:35, "One it might be that had been condemned to do penance in a sheet," you say "One it might be that he had been condemned to do penance in a sheet"
- At 27:16, "Upon this hutch, at the foot of the bed," part of "Upon" is cut off
- At 32:15, "and a lugubrious parrot that nonchalantly opened and shut one eye," you say "and a lugubrious parrot that nonchalantly opened and shut its one eye"
- At 34:31, "and you shall come to me in them after the dinner is drawn," it sounds as though part of "come" is cut out

[Scarbo]

Thank you, plotznik! I wasn't able to get to section 10 tonight, but I'll do my best to have it PL'd by the end of tomorrow.

[brownrottger]

Section 5 37:30 https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_05_ford_128kb.mp3

Thank you for section 5! It's very nicely done, and I appreciate your measured reading pace. I have just a few notes:

- At 9:29, "who had fallen on Sir John of Hainault and his fellows as they went back at night from the King’s lodgings to their own," you say "who had fallen on Sir John of Hainault and his friends as they went back at night from the King’s lodgings to their own"
- At 11:24, there's a repeat of "'Why, ask her,' the Lady Blanche said. 'I am tired of the sound of my own voice.'"
- At 22:04, "one comes trotting along the path," it sounds as though part of "trotting" has been cut out
- At 22:35, "One it might be that had been condemned to do penance in a sheet," you say "One it might be that he had been condemned to do penance in a sheet"
- At 27:16, "Upon this hutch, at the foot of the bed," part of "Upon" is cut off
- At 32:15, "and a lugubrious parrot that nonchalantly opened and shut one eye," you say "and a lugubrious parrot that nonchalantly opened and shut its one eye"
- At 34:31, "and you shall come to me in them after the dinner is drawn," it sounds as though part of "come" is cut out

Hey Sarah! Edits made per your great notes! New length 37:27

[Scarbo]

Section 10 (32:24)


https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_10_ford_128kb.mp3

Thanks again for this section! It sounds great. I have just a few notes:

- At 3:22, "and upon the whole he was relieved to be informed by the little Jehan," you say "and upon the whole he was believed to be informed by the little Jehan"
- At 28:26, "I’d no idea I was so ignorant; but I am," I hear "I’ve no idea I was so ignorant; but I am"
- At 32:06, "and he did not see who in the world was going to stand against him," it sounds as though "the" partially cuts out

[Scarbo]

Thank you, Christine! I ran out of time to spot-PL section 5 today, but I will tomorrow for sure.

[Scarbo]

Hey Sarah! Edits made per your great notes! New length 37:27

PL OK! Thank you!

[plotznik]

Section 10 (32:24)


https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_10_ford_128kb.mp3

Thanks again for this section! It sounds great. I have just a few notes:

- At 3:22, "and upon the whole he was relieved to be informed by the little Jehan," you say "and upon the whole he was believed to be informed by the little Jehan"
- At 28:26, "I’d no idea I was so ignorant; but I am," I hear "I’ve no idea I was so ignorant; but I am"
- At 32:06, "and he did not see who in the world was going to stand against him," it sounds as though "the" partially cuts out

Thanks so much, Sarah. I am still getting the hang of "editing in" a replacement like this, but I think I ahve addressed all these. Let me know if more is required!
gratefully
John

(32:22)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_10_ford_128kb.mp3

[Scarbo]

Thanks so much, Sarah. I am still getting the hang of "editing in" a replacement like this, but I think I ahve addressed all these. Let me know if more is required!
gratefully
John

(32:22)
https://librivox.org/uploads/lorda/ladieswhosebrighteyes_10_ford_128kb.mp3

Nothing more is needed, everything sounds great! Thank you! PL OK.

[brownrottger]

Hi Sarah, I am requesting two months extension on my claims.
Best,
Christine