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Great, thank you! :D
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14.56

https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/arrowsoffreethought_05_foote_128kb.mp3

My other two sections are being edited and will be posted soon.
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Thank you guys! MW updated. :thumbs:
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Section 21 - Nice reading! A couple of minor optional changes if you want to make them - none of them change the meaning significantly.

@2:41 don't go in yet - text is "don't go yet"
@2:59 Plenty of strong collecting boxes - text is "plenty of good strong collecting boxes"
@6:02 not to the young man - text is "not to the young gentleman"
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Thanks for your help Jo! :9:
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Section 20

General comment - the background noise level in this recording is quite noticeable/distracting. If it's possible to eliminate it by turning off the source while recording for future recordings, that is always the best option. If not, then some noise reduction would be the next alternative.

PL Notes:

@1:05 There as a section - text is "a reaction"
@4:11: demonical possessions - text is "demoniacal possession"
@4:46 The society stayed up - text is "The society stay up"
@4:56 The teacher - text is "The Preacher"
@5:07 thrust his bare hand text is "thrust his hand"
@7:57 and may account text is "may count"
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Section 19:

Very well read. Also the background noise is almost entirely gone from this recording. Whatever you did differently from section 20, it's worked very well!

A few PL Notes:

@2:o4 I hear "Ateism" should be "Atheism"
@2:39 I hear "septical" should be "sceptical" with a hard "c"
@3:09 I hear "prerequisite" should be "requisite"
@4:14 I hear "septic" should be "sceptic"
@4:41 I hear "Calvanist" should be "Calvanistic"
@1621 I hear "be looking upon" should be "be looked upon"
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Section 18 - very nice reading!

I have only one note and it is optional since it is obvious from the context

@11:03 text is Satan - I hear "Saintant"
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Section 17 - Nice reading!

PL Note

@5:42 the sentence "Our duty is to promote the one and combat the other." is missing before the final sentence that begins "If there be a just God,..."
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Section 19, PL notes corrected. Re-uploaded at https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/arrowsoffreethought_19_foote_128kb.mp3
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Section 19 now PL OK!
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Section 20, PL notes corrected, uploaded at https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/arrowsoffreethought_20_foote_128kb.mp3

Length 8:15
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