[COMPLETE][Biography]The history of St. Dominic by Augusta Theodosia Drane - kit

[Kitty]

Oh yeah. I assumed I would keep going if there were no other volunteers. But I guess that isn't the way it works. May I claim 11?

yes even with low traffic, it's always best to claim first. Just in case there would be someone else coming in the meantime who is also interested, we can avoid double work that way if it's officially claimed.

Thanks, Section 11 is yours

Sonia

[Kitty]

Here is corrected 10:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_10_drane_128kb.mp3

and Spot PL ok, thank you

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Thanks.

[neecheelok70]

Here is Section 11: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_11_drane_128kb.mp3; 22:17.

[neecheelok70]

May I claim 12 and 13?

[Kitty]

May I claim 12 and 13?

yes thank you so much will PL your section later in the day

Sonia

[Kitty]

Here is Section 11: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_11_drane_128kb.mp3; 22:17.

what carnage on the battlefield again. Another great chapter though and I like such historical episodes.

A few small notes to edit:

> at 10:28: (p. 142) "and there spent the night in confession and preparation for death" – you say " and there spent the night in confusion and preparation for confession and preparation for death" – the underlined part can be cut

> from 10:46 to 10:48: (p. 142/143) between "cause of God" and "De Montfort" – the silence feels a bit long here, I would cut a second or so

> at 12:38: (p. 143) "the infantry were left to strengthen the garrison" – maybe a jump in the audio here, I hear "and" between "strengthen" and "the"

> at 22:11: "end of chapter 11" – you say "section". To stay consistent with the original reader, we are opting for "chapter" in this project

thanks

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Here are the corrections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_11_drane_128kb.mp3

22:13. (I hate errors.)

[Kitty]

Here are the corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_11_drane_128kb.mp3
22:13. (I hate errors.)

I feel you but you really rarely have any errors so you are making my job quite easy.

And PL ok now. I still hear something like "and" at around 12:35 but it may be my ears playing tricks on my brain. In any case, it's perfectly understandable, so no need to do anything else.

Thank you.

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Here is 12:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_12_drane_128kb.mp3

28:44.

[Kitty]

thank you Jim, MW updated and will PL when I am back home in a few days

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

And 13: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_13_drane_128kb.mp3.

No hurry!

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_12_drane_128kb.mp3
And 13: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/stdominic_13_drane_128kb.mp3.

and I'm back and your two sections were the last of my accumulated backlog (I proceeded by alphabetical order )

Both sections absolutely PL ok and very interesting. I didn't know Dominic and Francis of Assisi were friends.

Thank you so much again, and I wish you a nice weekend

Sonia

[neecheelok70]

Thanks. You have a lovely one as well. Dispersion sounds interesting, so may I claim 14?

[Kitty]

Thanks. You have a lovely one as well. Dispersion sounds interesting, so may I claim 14?

now what will this be all about ? thank you

Sonia