[COMPLETE] World's Best Poetry, Vol. 7 (Part II) - kit

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » September 27th, 2020, 7:04 am

Section 99 for PL @ 11:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_099_various_128kb.mp3

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » September 27th, 2020, 11:58 am

More pl's below:

96 The Greenwood Shrift: George III and a Dying Woman in Windsor Forest by Robert and Caroline Southey 5:46
edit please:
* 2:28 I hear "I thought"-should be "though"

100 Lord Ullin's Daughter by Thomas Campbell 3:6
pl okay

102 Fitz-James and Roderick Dhu: From 'The Lady of the Lake,' Canto V by Sir Walter Scott 14:40
edit please:
*12:01 I hear "the goal above" should be "the gael above"
*12:28 i hear "the goal above maintained" should be the "gael above maintained"

I did look up the definition and this is what it is defined as:
Definition of Gael
1: a Scottish Highlander
2: a Celtic especially Gaelic-speaking inhabitant of Ireland, Scotland, or the Isle of Man

Please do make the above corrections and thank you!!

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » September 27th, 2020, 12:42 pm

Thank you, April! Having checked those timestamps, I noted that those notes were for Kate and Craig, specifically.

We're inching closer and closer to the finish line now!

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » September 27th, 2020, 10:16 pm

Recording now

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » September 27th, 2020, 10:41 pm

First the correction at 43.5 seconds - I recorded the whole line

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_041_various_128kb.mp3

And my final 4 DRs
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_104_jason_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_105_jason_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_107_jason_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_108_jason_128kb.mp3

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » September 27th, 2020, 11:21 pm

Thank you, Jason! This means all our assignments are in!

I feel like this can surely be cataloged this week. Our to-do list now is as follows:

* Sections 78, 84, 104, 105, 107 and 108 still need to be edited (only 105 and 107 are without editors)

* Sections 72 and 81 need to be amended with the given corrections and re-uploaded for spot PL

* Sections 96 and 102 have outstanding corrections that Kate and Craig need to submit

* April will PL and spot PL whatever is ready for her until the last file is PL'ed

In other words: there really isn't a whole lot left for us. If we work together in the next few days, we can get this finished in time for October!!

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2020, 12:46 am

KateG wrote: ↑September 27th, 2020, 4:58 am Here are the corrections for the narrator of section 72: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_072_narrator_corrections_128kb.mp3

super, excellent corrections, Kate. You managed them all correctly now (so my explanations were not bad

)

The finished poem is now ready for PL ok. A great story:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_072_various_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 22:05 min.

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2020, 1:05 am

and here are Guillaume and Guibour. Wonderful narration, Craig, thank you. And Tomas, your Guillaume is suitably lamenting

I really pitied him at the gate.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_084_various_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 4:42 min.

I'll assign myself to 105 for editing too and maybe someone else wants to take the last one remaining ?

Sonia

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » September 28th, 2020, 1:16 am

108 for PL at 3:21

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_108_various_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2020, 1:17 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:16 am 108 for PL at 3:21
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_108_various_128kb.mp3

super, thank you, Adrian

Sonia

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » September 28th, 2020, 1:17 am

Kitty wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:05 am

I'll assign myself to 105 for editing too and maybe someone else wants to take the last one remaining ?

Sonia

I'll edit 107 if you so wish.

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2020, 1:19 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:17 am I'll edit 107 if you so wish.

oh that would be great, thank you so much

so every section has an editor now. You can PL Jason's part at the same time (less work for April)

Sonia

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » September 28th, 2020, 1:41 am

Kitty wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:19 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:17 am I'll edit 107 if you so wish.
oh that would be great, thank you so much 8-) so every section has an editor now. You can PL Jason's part at the same time (less work for April)

Sonia

Hello Sonia,
Here is the assembled 107.
There was one issue with Jason's part, which I think we can live with. He states, "and Jason ... as the...", i.e. with a spurious leading "and", as he is not the last in the list of characters. If you disagree, this will be PL notes for Jason.

Best,
Adrian

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2020, 1:43 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:41 am There was one issue with Jason's part, which I think we can live with. He states, "and Jason ... as the...", i.e. with a spurious leading "and", as he is not the last in the list of characters. If you disagree, this will be PL notes for Jason.

yes we can live with that, but is it impossible for you to cut out the word "and" ? That may be the best solution in this case. If not, I guess it's fine.

Oh and you forgot the link

Sonia

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » September 28th, 2020, 1:50 am

Kitty wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:43 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑September 28th, 2020, 1:41 am There was one issue with Jason's part, which I think we can live with. He states, "and Jason ... as the...", i.e. with a spurious leading "and", as he is not the last in the list of characters. If you disagree, this will be PL notes for Jason.
yes we can live with that, but is it impossible for you to cut out the word "and" ? That may be the best solution in this case. If not, I guess it's fine.

Oh and you forgot the link

Sonia

Oops, here's the link: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldsbestpoetry7_2_107_various_128kb.mp3
I thought an edit here wouldn't work well, but it turned out that it does. So this version has the extra "and" removed.

Best Regards,
Adrian