Lmnei wrote: ↑November 15th, 2022, 6:25 pmWell my eye surgery was successful and I have gotten most of my sign back in my right eye
this sounds like a very daunting operation. Glad all went well and you are back in the saddle.
I inserted the links and length into the MW for you, you probably cannot handle the input of the window yet ?
Take it easy until you are fully recovered.
A very grand poem, it's wise you chopped it up into several smaller bits.
Sections
55, 57 and 58 are
PL ok, right away.
Section 56:
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at 2:24: "and la
mentations rose from city, hill and plain" – you say "la
minations"
Section 59:
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at 4:31: "and tender women
sorrowfully are bowed" – you say "
softly"
>
at 5:30: "As with a courtly wave that kings might im
itate" – you say "i
mate"
Section 60:
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at 0:02: "The flight of time" – here you say "
six" in the title, in the other sections you left out the numbers in the first part of the disclaimer. Maybe either cut it here as well, or insert the numbers everywhere, to stay consistent
>
at 0:18: "
Chapter 6: the gladiators" – you forgot the title right after the disclaimer
>
at 2:19: "and the deadly
cestus" – you say "
ceatus"
>
at 3:49: "by the deadly
cestus" – same here
>
at 6:36: "Still those dreadful swords in fierce
fiery circles scream!" – you say "
feary"
>
at 7:46: "
and a look of regret" –
stumble and repeat, one part can get cut
>
at 9:36: "ah
'twas a battle royal" – you say "
twice"
thanks
Sonia