Section 18 PL Notes:
~15:32 stumble of "much"
~21:08 "afterwards" was separated into two words which might make it hard to follow
~28:38 "tarry" (you pronounced it like the word about tar rhyming with star instead of the other meaning which rhymes with carry)
The volume is a bit low on this one at ~83 dB where we'd aim to have it above 86dB. Do you know how to amplify without clipping (using the compressor or limiter in audacity)?
Here's a series of 3 effects that should fix it automatically if you run them in this order:
Normalize (DC ticked, peak ticked -0.0, stereo unticked)
Compressor (Threshold -14, Noise Floor -25, Ratio 7:1, Attack 0.5, Release 1.9, Make up to 0dB ticked, compress peaks unticked)
Loudness Normalisation ('perceived loudness', -20 LUFS, the two checkboxes don't matter).
Hope that helps!