Dastardly Criminals in Space (Ed Reads Short Sci-fi, vol. IV)-ans

Ligeti_Grieg · Post by **Ligeti_Grieg** » January 5th, 2024, 5:35 am

I used a different way to count time on my DAW. Hopefully, that comes out better. So, chop chopping edits done.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » January 5th, 2024, 6:49 am

Ligeti_Grieg wrote: ↑January 5th, 2024, 5:35 am I used a different way to count time on my DAW. Hopefully, that comes out better. So, chop chopping edits done.

I just called them all PL OK. I'm sure they're fine.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » January 5th, 2024, 8:07 am

Section 12 PL OK, and you're good to go! Congratulations

Post by **annise** » January 5th, 2024, 1:03 pm

Good - I'll start the wheels turning. Any changes to the summary ? Anne

Post by **annise** » January 6th, 2024, 4:09 am

Conspiracy on Callisto Frederik Pohl https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/62476/pg62476-images.html Revolt was flaring on Callisto, and Peter Duane held the secret that would make the uprising a success or failure. Yet he could make no move, could favor no side—his memory was gone—he didn't know for whom he fought! Prison of a Billion Years CH Thames https://www.gutenberg.org/files/32150/32150-h/32150-h.htm A prison that it is literally impossible to break free from? How could this be? Watchbird Robert Sheckley https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/29579/pg29579-images.html Machines that can accurately predict when crimes will happen? What a great money spinner? But where's Tom Cruise when you need him? The Incomplete Theft Ralph Burke https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/65659/pg65659-images.html A grand new spaceship, tech that could win the war for the thief's planet! Infiltrating the construction team leaves but one task..

At the moment this is what the summary looks like
I haven't time at present to edit it
Just for starters - don't use the epub links at PG. PG changes them but the basic Etext is always available
suggestions
And starting a new line for each submission
And underlining or making bold the story title

Anne

Post by **annise** » January 6th, 2024, 4:18 am

Conspiracy on Callisto Frederik Pohl https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/62476 Revolt was flaring on Callisto, and Peter Duane held the secret that would make the uprising a success or failure. Yet he could make no move, could favor no side—his memory was gone—he didn't know for whom he fought!
Prison of a Billion Years CH Thames https://www.gutenberg.org/files/32150/32150-h/32150-h.htm A prison that it is literally impossible to break free from? How could this be?

Is about the simplest improvement but you can do as you prefer - It will be a couple of days before I have time to fiddle

Anne