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thank you so much! I'm glad the mystery of those lines got figured out-- I was not sure at all when I'd have time to go through the text again to check for them.
I will PL as soon as I can.
I will PL as soon as I can.
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just 1 PL note for Miranda in the prologue:kierenmetts wrote:Hello!
Here is Miranda (Sec. 20, prologue)
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3
Duration: 03:30
at ~ 0:33, a missing line. Between "What mouth so terrible Utters a voice so tender?" and "Setebos, be kind," we need "But why?"
other than that, it's perfect. thank you!
the "figure" line is PL okay.
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Hello!
Here is the new Miranda, prologue, with the missing line.
Thanks!
Kieren
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3
Duration: 03:39
Here is the new Miranda, prologue, with the missing line.
Thanks!
Kieren
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3
Duration: 03:39
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kierenmetts wrote:Hello!
Here is the new Miranda, prologue, with the missing line.
Thanks!
Kieren
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3
Duration: 03:39
My apologies--there was some garble on that one. I've uploaded it yet again:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_p.mp3
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Hello!
Here are files for Miranda, Act I and Act II:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_1.mp3
Duration: 02:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_2.mp3
Duration: 03:45
Thank you!
Kieren
Here are files for Miranda, Act I and Act II:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_1.mp3
Duration: 02:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_2.mp3
Duration: 03:45
Thank you!
Kieren
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Hi again!
Also just uploaded Miranda, Act III and Epilogue
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_3.mp3
Duration: 03:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_e.mp3
Duration: 00:14
Thank you!
Kieren
Also just uploaded Miranda, Act III and Epilogue
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_3.mp3
Duration: 03:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_e.mp3
Duration: 00:14
Thank you!
Kieren
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thank you so much!
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Miranda Act I is PL okay
for Act 2, a long pause in the middle of the first set of lines, from :34 to :38 or so.
I could edit this out later, but it might be safe if you could do it before I dig in to stitching all these roles together.
Miranda in Act 2 is PL okay otherwise.
for Act 2, a long pause in the middle of the first set of lines, from :34 to :38 or so.
I could edit this out later, but it might be safe if you could do it before I dig in to stitching all these roles together.
Miranda in Act 2 is PL okay otherwise.
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just 1 note for Miranda Act 3:
the line at 1:13 I think should be continuous-- "Come, busk him, merry men all:
Aye, both of us"
the "all" does have a colon after it, but it isn't formatted to indicate a different speaker or anything.
Miranda's epilogue is PL okay!
the line at 1:13 I think should be continuous-- "Come, busk him, merry men all:
Aye, both of us"
the "all" does have a colon after it, but it isn't formatted to indicate a different speaker or anything.
Miranda's epilogue is PL okay!
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and if anyone would like to spot-PL my prologue and epilogue edits, we'll be a few more inches closer to getting this thing finished. MaryAnn's PL notes for those are on page 12 and 13.
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plaidsicle wrote:Miranda Act I is PL okay
for Act 2, a long pause in the middle of the first set of lines, from :34 to :38 or so.
I could edit this out later, but it might be safe if you could do it before I dig in to stitching all these roles together.
Miranda in Act 2 is PL okay otherwise.
Thank you!
I will make the fixes in Acts 1, 2, 3 and upload asap....
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Hello!
Here are the new, fixed files for Miranda, Acts 2 and 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_2.mp3
Duration: 03:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_3.mp3
Duration: 03:52
Thanks!
Kieren
p.s. in my previous message i said i'd make fixes to acts 1, 2, and 3, but I meant just 2 and 3
Here are the new, fixed files for Miranda, Acts 2 and 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_2.mp3
Duration: 03:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/caliban_miranda_3.mp3
Duration: 03:52
Thanks!
Kieren
p.s. in my previous message i said i'd make fixes to acts 1, 2, and 3, but I meant just 2 and 3
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thank you! I will spot PL shortly.
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all good!
not much left now, besides editing.
I have heard from Kristin and she's planning to make her few edits within the next week or so.
I may not have time to start editing everything together until later in May, so no huge hurry. but we are getting close, at least!
not much left now, besides editing.
I have heard from Kristin and she's planning to make her few edits within the next week or so.
I may not have time to start editing everything together until later in May, so no huge hurry. but we are getting close, at least!
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I do want to start editing this soon and I may actually be able to get to it within the next few weeks! I'll see how it goes and ask for help if I need it.
I have not heard back from Kristin lately about her edits... and I don't really want to just orphan those lines... but maybe we will need to eventually. I know Kristin has a lot of other stuff on her plate.
any advice, MaryAnn?
edit to add: I just looked and realized my narrator bits still need PLing, too. I suppose I could post in Listeners Wanted for that, unless anyone here has time to PL those for us.
I have not heard back from Kristin lately about her edits... and I don't really want to just orphan those lines... but maybe we will need to eventually. I know Kristin has a lot of other stuff on her plate.
any advice, MaryAnn?
edit to add: I just looked and realized my narrator bits still need PLing, too. I suppose I could post in Listeners Wanted for that, unless anyone here has time to PL those for us.
'whenever people agree with me I always feel I must be wrong.' -Oscar Wilde
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