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benderca
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lorda wrote: September 16th, 2022, 4:56 pm Antony - Chapter 13:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_antony_13.mp3
Length: 0:18

Greetings from Germany. :)
Thanks, Bernd!
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hmpecker wrote: September 16th, 2022, 6:20 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_mr_mcbryde_18.mp3
Mr McBryde chapter 18
9m:21s
Wonderful portrayal of Mr. McBryde! I have a few minor notes for Chapter 18:

3:34 (p. 3) MISSING WORD: "in" EXTRA WORD: "that"
“I had no idea that was in your mind,”
(I hear: “I had no idea that that was your mind,”)

7:08 (p.6) MISSING WORD: "all"
“We shall all have to hang together..."
(I don't think this changes the meaning too much - so this correction is optional).

8:59 (p. 7) EXTRA WORD: "who"
“Wife indeed, I know those wives!”

Thanks!
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hmpecker wrote: September 16th, 2022, 6:37 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_mr_mcbryde_22.mp3
Mr McBryde Chapter 22
3m:20s
Mr. McBryde Chapter 22
Missing Line at beginning (p. 2):
MCBRYDE, RONNY: “Good God, good God!”

Thanks!
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Hamidullah Chapters 2 and 5 are PL OK!
Nice portrayal, Todd!
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GregGiordano wrote: September 15th, 2022, 9:42 am
benderca wrote: September 15th, 2022, 4:28 am

Professor Godbole Chapter 7 is PL OK!
Nice reading, Greg. You really capture the essence of the wise old professor. I was really hoping I'd get to hear you sing as the milkmaiden, but alas... lol! :lol:
Thank you for the positive feedback. I am always willing to try new roles but a singing milkmaid
may be just out of reach! 😀
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benderca wrote: September 16th, 2022, 11:16 am
yourbookvoice wrote: July 15th, 2022, 4:56 pm Major Callendar
Chapter 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_majorcallendar_02.mp3
Time: 16s
Kerry Adams
Your Book Voice
yourbookvoice wrote: July 15th, 2022, 4:15 pm Major Callendar
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_majorcallendar_06.mp3
Time: 1m 14s
Kerry Adams
Your Book Voice

Major Callendar, Chapters 2 and 6 are PL OK! Wonderful portrayal of this obnoxious character -- you had me laughing out loud! Thanks, Kerry!
Thank you! He is such an insufferable stuffed shirt... so caught up with himself, and his inflated self-importance. I'm glad this carried across in my interpretation.

Take care and be of good cheer. :)
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yourbookvoice wrote: September 17th, 2022, 1:25 pm
benderca wrote: September 16th, 2022, 11:16 am
Major Callendar, Chapters 2 and 6 are PL OK! Wonderful portrayal of this obnoxious character -- you had me laughing out loud! Thanks, Kerry!
Thank you! He is such an insufferable stuffed shirt... so caught up with himself, and his inflated self-importance. I'm glad this carried across in my interpretation.

Take care and be of good cheer. :)
Ha! - "insufferable stuffed shirt... so caught up with himself, and his inflated self-importance" is a perfect description of him! I realized "obnoxious" was too lenient when I wrote it, but the phrases that came to my mind were not family-friendly and appropriate for an open online discussion... :lol:
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Thanks, Anna Kate! Great portrayal of Mrs. Turton!

One small request for Chapter 3, when reading the character's name, you say "Miss Turton" instead of "Mrs. Turton." You can submit this voice credit as an extra file and I'll mark Chapter 3 as PL OK. Just call the new file: passagetoindia_mrs_turton_voicecredit.mp3
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Fantastic portrayal of Mr. Turton! I just have one tiny note for Chapter 3:
1:03 (p. 6)
“Do you really want to meet the Aryan Brother, Miss Quested?" (I'm not sure if it's the recording or the editing, but I can't hear the word "you").

Thanks!
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away for the weekend. will fix those lines ASAP
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https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_mr_mcbryde_18.mp3

thanks for the excellent PL. Corrected missing/extra words.
chapter 18
9m:21s
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https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_mr_mcbryde_22.mp3

chapter 22 with missing dialogue corrected.
3m:32s
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Would like to have section 11, Mahmoud Ali. (The magic window doesn't show the text feom which to read). Can I do it?
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Anything I could do to help? Except reading that is. I am not sure about the copyright in my country.
I have been reading books about partition and british raj since last year. Mostly by Indian authors. So I am interested in this book about british raj by a foreigner (not Indian).
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Indianreader wrote: September 19th, 2022, 6:24 pm Would like to have section 11, Mahmoud Ali. (The magic window doesn't show the text feom which to read). Can I do it?
Mahmoud Ali is in Chapters 2, 4, 24, 25, 29. So please scroll down in the Magic Window to the chapter sections at the bottom - Chapter 2 is currently in Line 51 and Chapter 4 in Line 53, etc. In the chapter section you can see a link to the color-coded scripts on my Google drive. "Chapter 2 Script" for example will lead you to: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wVzqQ_-znm6FsxEdt9niPUMkJl-U34CT/view . Welcome aboard!
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