[COMPLETE] The Iliad - Trans into English Blank Verse - law

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Section 21 is PL OK! :thumbs: Well done!
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Sedtion 22 is PL OK! :D :clap: Great reading!
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Thank you!!!!!

I was crying a little. :oops:
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Post by marmenta »

Hello again.

I had section 23 all done and ready for upload then I somehow deleted the file that I need to open it so I recorded that again. :oops:

I discovered :oops: that on section 4, I destroyed the pronunciation on 4 very important character's names. Tlepolemus, Glaucus, Polydamus and Penelaus.

I took the section and fixed those. There's only 5 places where they occur. Otherwise they are described with their father's name. I need to fix that on Book 3 too. The pronunciations of those are correct later on.

I also have section 24 almost ready to send.

:D
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Hi! I hope you're having a great start to your New Year. I've uploaded Book 17 and 18

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_23_homer.mp3
1:09:55

https://librivox.org/uploads/chocoholic/iliad_24_homer.mp3
58:02

I hope you like it! :D
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PL notes section23:
11:10 - repeat 'While, in his mind and spirit thus he mused
By Hector led, the Trojan ranks advanc'd
Backward he mov'd

By Hector led, the Trojan ranks advanc'd
Backward he mov'd, abandoning the dead'
33:30 - repeat 'So ordered Ajax, then with crimson blood
the earth was wet, and hand to hand they fell,
Trojans alike, and brave Allies, and Greeks.
'
then with crimson blood
the earth was wet, and hand to hand they fell,
Trojans alike, and brave Allies, and Greeks'
1:08:35 - repeat 'And, 'mid their comrades proudly eminent,
two chiefs, AEneas, old Anchises' son

And, 'mid their comrades proudly eminent,
two chiefs, AEneas, old Anchises' son
And glorious Hector'

Great reading!!
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I accidentally added a section without typing in my name as reader. :oops: Can we fix that?
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Post by chocoholic »

Certainly! Just go to BC Admin and look above the list of sections for the button that reads Assign Reader Sections. Click on it and you'll be able to enter the section number and add your name. You will need to choose your name from the dropdown list, so type in the first few letters and then select it when you see it.
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Post by kathrinee »

Section 23 is PL OK after spotcheck! :)

In section 24 there is a repeat at 42:55 'his prize
Selected for him by the sons of Greece,
Great Agamemnon wrested from his arms

his prize
Selected for him by the sons of Greece,
Great Agamemnon wrested from his arms'

Everything else is great! :thumbs:
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Thank you, both!!
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Section 25, book 19 is PL OK! :D
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:D
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Section 24 is PL OK after spot-check! :thumbs:

Did you edit something on section 25? :hmm:
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Section 26, Book 20:
30:15 - the underlined words are missing: 'The brass-tipp'd spear withdrawing, laid it down
Before Achilles' feet, and lifting up'
34:25 - repeat 'His course midway arrested. Him will I
encounter
, His course midway arrested. Him will I
encounter, thought his hands'

Good work! :thumbs:
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