COMPLETE[PLAY]Which is the Man?, by Cowley - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » November 8th, 2022, 6:39 am

Act 1 ready for Final PL.

Great acting - I await most of the rest of you showing up in Act 2!

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » November 8th, 2022, 9:41 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑November 8th, 2022, 6:39 amAct 1 ready for Final PL.

yep an excellent start and already the quirkiest persons are on stage.

Everybody is shining in their respective roles. Loved it and awaiting the next act

Act 1 PL ok, excellently assembled.

Thanks

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 8th, 2022, 7:34 pm

Act 2 ready for Final PL.

The plot thickens and more characters appear. Nicely read.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » November 9th, 2022, 1:16 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑November 8th, 2022, 7:34 pmAct 2 ready for Final PL.
The plot thickens and more characters appear. Nicely read.

even more quirkier characters appear

and the confusion is starting to grow about who is really interested in whom.

Excellently PL ok again. Thanks

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 9th, 2022, 2:24 pm

Act 3 is ready for Final PL.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » November 10th, 2022, 12:53 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑November 9th, 2022, 2:24 pmAct 3 is ready for Final PL.

the scene with Pendragon and Julia is simply priceless

how he would ever dream he had a chance with her ....

Brilliantly acted out by everybody, what a treat.

I do have two suggestions for edits this time however:

> at 16:49: (p. 27) "then it seems impossible" - to Fitzherbert - "pardon me sir" - I would insert "to Fitzherbert" before "pardon me", because the way I see it, she says all this to Pendragon, except the "pardon me" bit, which she says to her guardian, to excuse herself interrupting and going against his wishes.

> at 18:18: (p. 28) "you lose me" - to Pendragon - "keep it up with spirit" - same here, I think "to Pendragon" needs to come before "keep it up", as this is the part he says to Pendragon, not the last sentence, which he probably more says to himself as aside

the rest is excellently assembled

thanks

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 10th, 2022, 1:10 pm

Both very good points - thank you.

Reloaded for Spot PL.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » November 10th, 2022, 2:21 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑November 10th, 2022, 1:10 pmReloaded for Spot PL.

and PL ok now

thanks

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 11th, 2022, 9:54 am

Act 4 is ready for Final PL.

Oh no!!?? What will happen next? Wonderfully acted, all of you.

Now, on to the Grand Soiree scene. Cue the champagne!

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 11th, 2022, 11:52 am

And Act 5 is done and ready for final PL as well.

The good prosper, and the bad - that be me - are left to stumble away....

Wonderful performances from you all. Thank you!

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 11th, 2022, 2:32 pm

Post by **Kitty** » November 11th, 2022, 2:33 pm

both acts PL ok, excellently edited, wonderfully performed by all. This was a riot. And the ending was really a ganging up on poor Lord Sparkle

Highly amusing play. Looking forward to the next one.

Thank you all ! It was a treat.

This is ready for the catalogue.

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 12th, 2022, 6:32 am

Glad you enjoyed it, seeing everything lumped up upon me at the end....

Cataloging now.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 12th, 2022, 1:39 pm

This project is complete. Audio files can be found on our Librivox catalog page at https://librivox.org/which-is-the-man-by-hannah-cowley/

Thank you all. Next Cowley launched at viewtopic.php?f=27&t=95344&sid=cad5b4d52dfb67754c15b231f5fdc9d0

Thanks, Todd