[COMPLETE] Whitman: An Interpretation in Narrative by Emory Holloway - dc

Post by **craigdav1** » May 22nd, 2024, 1:14 pm

5 PL OK!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 24th, 2024, 3:36 pm

Here is speedy, lengthy Section 6.

Post by **craigdav1** » May 25th, 2024, 6:30 am

6
5:25 small audio glitch.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 26th, 2024, 9:11 am

Here is correction and 7. Sorry so long. I probably should have taken a different approach to this project.

Post by **craigdav1** » May 26th, 2024, 9:27 am

6 PL OK!

No apologies needed. You're the one doing the heavy lifting.

Post by **craigdav1** » May 26th, 2024, 11:07 am

7 PL OK!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 26th, 2024, 11:34 am

So happy for those words. I feared otherwise. Here is 8.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 27th, 2024, 5:03 am

I need to mention that about 25 there seems to be some repetitive stumbling but it is so in the text. Jim

Post by **craigdav1** » May 27th, 2024, 1:03 pm

8
17:52-18:02 the reading speed seems higher in this brief section. Not a lot....your call as to whether it needs correction.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 28th, 2024, 6:05 am

I think it fits in better with the ensuing speed. If not, I can re-apply the adjustment. Jim

Post by **craigdav1** » May 28th, 2024, 11:20 am

8 PL OK!!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 28th, 2024, 1:04 pm

Thanks. And here is 9.

Post by **craigdav1** » May 28th, 2024, 4:42 pm

9 PL OK!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » May 29th, 2024, 11:51 am

And now 10.

Post by **craigdav1** » May 29th, 2024, 2:26 pm

10
In the intro you forgot to say, "Part 1"
5:54 delete repeat, "shabby"