[SOLO] The Animate And The Inanimate by William Sidis - tg

[niobium]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/animateandtheinanimate_08_sidis_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/animateandtheinanimate_09_sidis_128kb.mp3

[lightcrystal]

Sections 8 and 9 PL OK

[niobium]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/animateandtheinanimate_11_sidis_128kb.mp3

I am not very knowledgeable about the progress humanity has made with cosmology in the past couple of centuries, but it is astonishing how far theoretical knowledge got without the help of computers.

[lightcrystal]

Section 10 is PL OK.
I will PL 11 tomorrow.

[lightcrystal]

Section 11 is PL OK!

[niobium]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/animateandtheinanimate_12_sidis_128kb.mp3

can you also spot check the repairs to the earlier sections?

[lightcrystal]

Section 6 is PL OK!

Section 7 still needs a change.

Section 7 Spot PL:

middle of page 46

9:12

You say reserve - need reverse

needs to be in:

in the peculiarity of life is its ability to draw on more energy than the second law of thermodynamics would allow; that is, its ability, in some circumstances at least, to reverse that second law.

[lightcrystal]

Section 12 PL Notes:

9:53
middle of p 77
Replace particulars with particles in
Universes are the particles that make up existence.
___________-

19:27
middle p 82
You have said regular either by intent or it being said not clearly de facto.
You need to say instead:
This vibration should be irregular

[niobium]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/animateandtheinanimate_13_sidis_128kb.mp3

[lightcrystal]

Noted and will DPL soon.

[lightcrystal]

Section 13 PL Notes:

[1.] At the start you've mixed up the long and short forms of the LibriVox introduction. I will make this a PL Note to correct because if I let this drift it could in future sections diverge more. Please choose one, usually the short form after the first section.

[2.] About 16:28, bottom of p 95, you have said procure instead of produce.

In " would produce matter which would actually move in all directions "

[niobium]

certainly past the halfway point now. A couple more short chapters are ready for review, and I decided to follow the 2nd version of the librivox intro from now on

[lightcrystal]

I have changed sections 7,12,13 all to see PL Notes to emphasize that things still need to be done in them.
I would strongly advise dealing with them first before you possibly lose any original files. I could repeat the PL Notes required again if that helps.

Section 14: the introduction is a mix of the long and short forms. [This section is not marked as being assigned to any reader? NOTE Tricia G has just assigned this section.]

Section 15. Again the forms of introduction are mixed up. I also have to ask for a better pronunciation. I will only do this if it is a clear impediment to the listener. I have to point out:

- "Uncertainty" at approx 9:49 and 9:54, Both are said as "uncertanity" which is a serious deviation from what a listener would need.

I WOULD STRONGLY ADVISE DEALING WITH ALL THESE SECTIONS BEFORE SUBMITTING ANY MORE.

[TriciaG]

I assigned section 14.

[lightcrystal]

I assigned section 14.

Thank you. Changed PL Notes to reflect.