[COMPLETE] History of the Rise, Progress and Termination of the American Revolution Vol. 3, by Mercy Otis Warren -brrot

Roselbex · Post by **Roselbex** » February 2nd, 2024, 5:50 pm

I have uploaded Section 9 Length 12:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/historyamericanrevolutionvol3_09_warren_128kb.mp3

Roselbex · Post by **Roselbex** » February 2nd, 2024, 6:33 pm

I have uploaded Section 10 Length 11:54
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/historyamericanrevolutionvol3_10_warren_128kb.mp3

I would like to claim Ch 23 but there seems to be a problem with sections 13 and 14

progressingamerica · February 2nd, 2024, 10:31 pm

MFD32 wrote: ↑January 31st, 2024, 5:40 pm OK, got it.
I have a similar but greater concern about the upcoming appendices to sections 3 and 4 (as well as other chapters further down). These huge notes could be considered sections unto themselves, and I believe they will distract the listener away from the meat of the story. For instance, is it necessary to recite all 14 Articles of Capitulation smack in the middle of the chapter? Or is is better to suffice that they were signed, and that the listener may find the details elsewhere? Perhaps they can have their own sections, kind of like bonus chapters.

My $.02

-Mark-

Sounds like a good idea. I'll look at those appendixes tomorrow morning and make some changes to the MW.

Thanks.

progressingamerica · February 3rd, 2024, 9:02 am

Roselbex wrote: ↑February 2nd, 2024, 6:33 pm I would like to claim Ch 23 but there seems to be a problem with sections 13 and 14

One of the sections got moved out of order, I put them back. Chapter assigned. Thank you

Roselbex · Post by **Roselbex** » February 3rd, 2024, 1:31 pm

Hi, Chapter 22 had been sections 7-10 but is now marked as 6-9. I can go back and change the intros as needed. I will record no more at the moment as I see you may want to add sections for the appendices. Let me know how you want me to handle this, thank you, Rosie

Cbteddy · Post by **Cbteddy** » February 3rd, 2024, 7:51 pm

MFD32 wrote: ↑January 31st, 2024, 5:48 pm Sections 1 and 2 are ready.

10:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/historyamericanrevolutionvol3_01_warren_128kb.mp3

12:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/historyamericanrevolutionvol3_02_warren_128kb.mp3

-Mark-

Section 1 is PL OK!

Post by **brownrottger** » February 3rd, 2024, 7:53 pm

I would like to claim Section 54 please.

progressingamerica · February 4th, 2024, 10:06 am

Roselbex wrote: ↑February 3rd, 2024, 1:31 pm Hi, Chapter 22 had been sections 7-10 but is now marked as 6-9. I can go back and change the intros as needed. I will record no more at the moment as I see you may want to add sections for the appendices. Let me know how you want me to handle this, thank you, Rosie

Changing the intros would be the easiest. Those appendices should have been their own sections from the beginning.

Thank you.

progressingamerica · February 4th, 2024, 10:11 am

brownrottger wrote: ↑February 3rd, 2024, 7:53 pm I would like to claim Section 54 please.

I'll get that set for you.

Cbteddy · Post by **Cbteddy** » February 4th, 2024, 11:23 am

MFD32 wrote: ↑January 31st, 2024, 5:48 pm Sections 1 and 2 are ready.

10:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/historyamericanrevolutionvol3_01_warren_128kb.mp3

12:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/historyamericanrevolutionvol3_02_warren_128kb.mp3

-Mark-

Section 2 is PL OK!