COMPLETE[PLAY]Lady Bountiful by Pinero - thw

AgnesRobert · Post by **AgnesRobert** » November 26th, 2023, 9:12 pm

hello, may I please be Mrs. Veale

Post by **Kitty** » November 27th, 2023, 2:38 am

Beeswaxcandle wrote: ↑November 25th, 2023, 7:56 pmSir Lucian Brent:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_lucianbrent_1.mp3 03:12
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_lucianbrent_2.mp3 01:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_lucianbrent_4.mp3 02:55

a great characterization, excellently acted out. I like the flippancy of Lucian, your voice is perfect for him

The embarrassement about the latin was priceless

Acts 1 and 2 are straight PL ok.

A few edits for Act 4 however:

> at about 0:29: (p. 172) missed line: "Indeed ?"
> at 0:59: (p. 174) "My dear Beatrix" – you forgot "my dear", or maybe cut out by mistake ?

thanks

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » November 27th, 2023, 7:47 am

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑November 26th, 2023, 9:12 pm hello, may I please be Mrs. Veale

Thank you.

Todd

llamaart · Post by **llamaart** » November 27th, 2023, 10:17 am

May I claim Beatrix Brent?

Best wishes, Allie.

Post by **ToddHW** » November 27th, 2023, 10:40 am

Thank you.

Todd

llamaart · Post by **llamaart** » November 27th, 2023, 11:58 am

Here is Beatrix act 1.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_beatrixbrent_1.mp3 3:52

Best wishes, Allie.

Post by **ToddHW** » November 27th, 2023, 12:44 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Beeswaxcandle · Post by **Beeswaxcandle** » November 27th, 2023, 7:58 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑November 27th, 2023, 2:38 am a great characterization, excellently acted out. I like the flippancy of Lucian, your voice is perfect for him The embarrassement about the latin was priceless

Acts 1 and 2 are straight PL ok.

A few edits for Act 4 however:

> at about 0:29: (p. 172) missed line: "Indeed ?"
> at 0:59: (p. 174) "My dear Beatrix" – you forgot "my dear", or maybe cut out by mistake ?

thanks

Sonia

Act 4 replaced

Post by **Kitty** » November 28th, 2023, 1:40 am

llamaart wrote: ↑November 27th, 2023, 11:58 amHere is Beatrix act 1.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_beatrixbrent_1.mp3 3:52

thank you Allie, a sweet voice for young Trixie.

nicely pouted.

I do have a few small edits to note though:

> at 0:01: "Beatrix Brent" – I think you say "Bent"

> at about 0:53: (p. 19) missed line: "Hateful boy !" (you could also leave out more editing space between the previous and the following quote)

> at 2:07: (p. 21) "Tell Trixie" – you say "well"

> at 2:35: (p. 22) between " Roderick and Dennis" and "That hasn't told us much" – please also leave enough editing space when there are stage directions inside your speech.

> at about 3:04: (p. 31) missed line: "Oh yes, we'll come."

thank you

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » November 28th, 2023, 1:40 am

Beeswaxcandle wrote: ↑November 27th, 2023, 7:58 pmAct 4 replaced

and PL ok now, thank you

Sonia

Butterflier38 · Post by **Butterflier38** » November 28th, 2023, 11:58 am

Can I claim Margaret Veale?

llamaart · Post by **llamaart** » November 28th, 2023, 12:00 pm

I think I fixed everything, please let me know if I didn't!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_beatrixbrent_1.mp3 4:07

Best wishes, Allie.

Post by **ToddHW** » November 28th, 2023, 12:17 pm

Butterflier38 wrote: ↑November 28th, 2023, 11:58 am Can I claim Margaret Veale?

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » November 28th, 2023, 12:18 pm

llamaart wrote: ↑November 28th, 2023, 12:00 pm I think I fixed everything, please let me know if I didn't!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ladybountiful_beatrixbrent_1.mp3 4:07

Best wishes, Allie.

Thank you.

Todd

WendyKatzHiller · Post by **WendyKatzHiller** » November 28th, 2023, 6:44 pm

May I request Mrs. Hodnutt?

Thanks,
Wendy