excitement is good and silliness in this play is a must great to see you act out right from the start (you do know that the drama forum is addicting, right ? )rssmith121999 wrote:Cook Act 3 https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donquixoteinengland_cook_3.mp3
im debating if this needs another couple takes, let me know if indeed it does.
thanks for letting me participate! i fear ki may have been a little excited during my session.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donquixoteinengland_manager_intr.mp3
theatre manager, intro, I sort of stumbled a little but i think it plays well as the manager might have been a little flustered?!
both characters were excellently performed and very funny. The manager sounds a bit threatening at some points, and I think this is wholly warranted by what he says I predict we'll hear you in plenty other plays soon.
However, a few small adjustements before this can be marked ok:
for the Manager:
> the overall volume is too loud, over 92 dB. Maybe decrease by -2 to get into a better average. The problem with the volume can be that if it's recorded too loud, clipping can occur which distorts the audio.
> for the voice credit, please always read the name as written in the Magic Window, here: "Manager, read by"
> at 0:42: (p. 1) stumble and repeat, can be cropped: ""bring three or four to the house"
for the cook:
> same here, volume is over 92 dB. Maybe decrease by -2 again
>in the voice credits: you don't have to say "act 3" , this is done by the narrator of the play, just the description as marked in the MW
If you reupload with the exact same filename, the old files get replaced by the new ones
Thanks ! And great that you had your LV acting debut in this farce. You certainly have the comedic talent for it.
Sonia