COMPLETE[PLAY]The Old Bachelor by William Congreve - thw

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Here is capricious Vainlove:

"vain" describes this character well I loved the sneer in your voice throughout and the faux-outrage in the final act. Great job Tomas

Acts 1-4 already PL ok

I would only have a suggestion for Act 5 to change the emphasis of one sentence:

> at 1:52: "I know whom you have not got" - this is in direct reply to Sir Joseph's "Mr. Vainlove, I suppose you know whom I have got". So it would sound better if you stress "not" here: "I know whom you have NOT got."

Other than that, all perfect thanks

Sonia

[Craigos]

Could I take on Barnaby please.

[Kitty]

Could I take on Barnaby please.

thank you Craig. You know you will be butlering in a den of sin here ? Mistress Fondlewife (that's me) is taking marital faithfulness quite lightly

Sonia

[Craigos]

I can cope with that.

[WiltedScribe]

I would only have a suggestion for Act 5 to change the emphasis of one sentence:

> at 1:52: "I know whom you have not got" - this is in direct reply to Sir Joseph's "Mr. Vainlove, I suppose you know whom I have got". So it would sound better if you stress "not" here: "I know whom you have NOT got."

Yes, that makes so much more sense. Thank you for pointing it out, Sonia. I made the change and it's ready for quick spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_vainlove_5_128kb.mp3

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Yes, that makes so much more sense. Thank you for pointing it out, Sonia. I made the change and it's ready for quick spot PL:

yes that's how I meant sounds better, thank you Tomas. PL ok now

Sonia

[Craigos]

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_barnaby_4_128kb.mp3 57s

Another short one for you,

Cheers

[Kitty]

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_barnaby_4_128kb.mp3 57s
Another short one for you,

thank you, Craig. Barnaby is quite an original the final comparison was quite risqué, but accurate to the situation here

only one small addition please:

> for the voice credit please always include the full description, here "Barnaby, servant to Fondlewife, read by Craig Franklin"

thanks

Sonia

[MrsHand]

Could I read Sharper?

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[MrsHand]

Here's Sharper!


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_01_128kb.mp3 3:48
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_02_128kb.mp3 5:08
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_03_128kb.mp3 1:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_04_128kb.mp3 2:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_05_128kb.mp3 6:13

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[BLNEW]

Hello,

Could I please have a one month extension on Araminta? With all that is going on with telecommuting and my new limited quiet time provided by those around me, I won't be able to get to it before the 20th of this month.

Thanks,
~B