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llamaart
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Thank you for letting me know! I will fix it asap! And yes that line belongs to the narrator not Dicky!

Best wishes, Allie.
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Kalamareader wrote: November 28th, 2023, 9:14 pm Allie,

Here is Chapter 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_narrator_3.mp3

I have a couple of observations as I did this narration:

18:26 And the youngest young lady put an eye to the heart-shaped hole, and then opened the shutter and said ‘Well?’ very
crossly. Then Oswald said--
On this one, you don't have the 'young lady' saying "Well". I didn't say it and left the 5 seconds for her to say it.


8:12 Dicky thought it ought to be something fat, because coiners are always a desperate gang; and the machinery they make the coins with is so heavy and handy for knocking down detectives.
And on this one you have Dicky saying the line from "ought......" I think that that should probably be part of the narration and read it as such. If you want to change it, just let me know.

Wayne
Thank you for another amazing narration!

In two spots you said murder when Alice was supposed to, but I can fix that easily! Chapter 3 PL OK!

Best wishes, Allie.
In God I trust.
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llamaart wrote: November 29th, 2023, 11:00 am

Thank you for another amazing narration!

In two spots you said murder when Alice was supposed to, but I can fix that easily! Chapter 3 PL OK!

Best wishes, Allie.
I really debated about that, but put it in, as it seemed to be a description of what Alice was supposed to say, rather than a quote of what she did say. But, of course, your call. I stand corrected.

And thank you for your kind words. :9:

Wayne
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victoriaalicebell wrote: November 28th, 2023, 6:38 pm
llamaart wrote: November 25th, 2023, 1:11 pm
victoriaalicebell wrote: November 25th, 2023, 7:21 am

I didn't think that was for the same character because in the MW it says: Eliza (The Bastables housekeeper) Ch. 6.
It is! Sorry! Eliza is the Bastables housekeeper I just put the name one the first section so people would know what role she played. Sorry for all the confusion! Both Eliza sections are the same person!

Best wishes, Allie.
No problem! Here is Eliza chapter 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_eliza_6.mp3 (0:08).
Thank you! Eliza chapter 6 PL OK.

Best wishes, Allie.
In God I trust.
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Here is Mrs. Mallow

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_mrsmallow_11.mp3


Boy, I keep picking ugly personalities :lol:
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LCaulkins wrote: December 1st, 2023, 9:39 am Here is Mrs. Mallow

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_mrsmallow_11.mp3


Boy, I keep picking ugly personalities :lol:
Quiet, wife! Back to the manse with you! 8-)
Jim in Ohio

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:lol:
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Oh my gosh :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Jim in Ohio

Why are more astronauts from Ohio than any other state? Because it’s so bad that they want to leave earth entirely!
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LCaulkins wrote: December 1st, 2023, 9:39 am Here is Mrs. Mallow

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_mrsmallow_11.mp3


Boy, I keep picking ugly personalities :lol:
Thank you! Mrs. Mallow PL OK!
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Post by llamaart »

JHedrick wrote: December 2nd, 2023, 6:56 am Some bit parts for you:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_editor_05.mp3 [3:28]
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_mrmallow_11.mp3 [2:08]
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_burglar_13.mp3 [2:10]

Incidentally, there is a bit of narration marked as burglar dialog in chapter 13.
I fixed that! Thanks for letting me know!

All parts are PL OK!
In God I trust.
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Here is Chapter 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_narrator_04.mp3

Wayne

P.S. I noticed that my Chapter 3 isn't in the MW.
Wayne
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Post by llamaart »

Kalamareader wrote: December 5th, 2023, 8:11 pm Here is Chapter 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_narrator_04.mp3

Wayne

P.S. I noticed that my Chapter 3 isn't in the MW.
Thank you for letting me know! I got it fixed!
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Post by llamaart »

crystalcat wrote: December 5th, 2023, 11:58 am https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/thestoryofthetreasureseekers_princesspauline_06.mp3 2 mins

Here is Princess Pauline chapter 6!


Addy.
Thank you! Just one PL note.

At 1:02 please add 3-5 seconds of silence between the lines.

Thank you! Best wishes, Allie.
In God I trust.
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