COMPLETE Bizarre by Lawton Mackall - kd

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Hi Nick,

13 & 15 are PL OK and I made a note for 14 for you to check and see what you think:

@1:33 I think that should read 12 "Mid-day" rather than "Midnight" for the Midnight Edition since the paper is hopelessly late?
11 A. M.—Hopelessly Late Edition—One constellation

12 M.—Midnight Edition—Two constellations

1 P. M.—Tomorrow Morning Edition—Group of planets
Laura
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lvictoria wrote:Hi Nick,

13 & 15 are PL OK and I made a note for 14 for you to check and see what you think:

@1:33 I think that should read 12 "Mid-day" rather than "Midnight" for the Midnight Edition since the paper is hopelessly late?
11 A. M.—Hopelessly Late Edition—One constellation

12 M.—Midnight Edition—Two constellations

1 P. M.—Tomorrow Morning Edition—Group of planets
I believe you are right, Laura. I just automatically associated M with Midnight, but considering the time sequence that really doesn't made sense. I'll make the correction. Thanks!
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after further consideration, I decided that the proper thing to do was just to read it as written.
I uploaded a new file. The time is the same.
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Perfect and it's good to go!!
Laura
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16 is PL OK!!
Laura
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17 is PL OK!!
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18-22 are PL OK!!
Laura
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