COMPLETE: Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare - choc

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PL notes Romeo act 3:
scenes 3 and 5 are lacking. Scene there is all OK :)

PL notes Romeo act 5
00:42 - repeat: 'Dost thou not bring me letters from the friar?'
02:41 - I hear 'shop' instead of 'house'
04:21 - I hear 'now, upon thy life' instead of 'upon thy life'
04:46 - I hear '(a)nd therefore hence' rather than 'therefore hence'
08:32 - 'here' is missing

Well read!
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PL Juliet act 2

Before you start reading the list below: most things I found were small! Also, I might have misheard some places. Well done, you and Romeo will make a great couple! :)
00:27 - I hear 'What's a Montague?' rather than 'What's Montague?'
00:30 - is read 'nor hand, nor arm, nor foot, nor face' - the text says 'nor hand, nor foot, nor arm, nor face'
00:33 - I hear 'belonging to man' instead of 'belonging to a man'
00:34 - I hear 'be but some other name' instead of 'be some other name'
00:55 - I hear 'for that name it is no part' rather than 'for that name which is no part'
01:07 - is read 'I have not yet' instead of 'My ears have not yet'
01:45 - I hear 'found'st though this place' instead of 'found'st thou out this place'
02:01 - is read 'Fain I would dwell', not 'Fain would I'
03:10 - I hear 'lest thy love' instead of 'lest that thy love
04:12 - I hear 'it to thee' instead of 'it thee again'
04:41 - I hear 'if thy bent' rather than 'if that thy bent'
04:46 - sounds to me like 'by one I'll procure' instead of 'by one that I'll procure'
05:10 - I hear 'Tomorrow I will send' instead of 'tomorrow will I send'
05:56 - sounds like 'To have thee stand' instead of 'to have thee still stand'
06:55 - to my ears it sounds like 'driving back showers', the text says 'shadows'
07:27 - I hear 'unwielding' rather than 'unwieldy'
08:27 - I hear 'I did know that before' instead of 'but all this did I know before'
09:44 - I hear 'But they are but' and the text says 'They are but'
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Post by wildemoose »

If I can add one thing to that (because it stuck out in my mind when I heard it), in Juliet's Act 2 lines, for "the god of my idolatry" I heard "the god of my adultery." Sorry for not having the timestamp! I think that's one we should probably get right, lest anyone get the wrong idea about poor innocent Juliet. :)
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PL Juliet act 03
00:20 - I hear 'leap into these arms' instead of 'leap to these arms'
00:41 - I hear 'hook my unmann'd' instead of 'hood my unmann'd'
01:00 - I hear 'than snow' rather than 'than new snow'
01:15 - is read 'that the world will be' instead of 'that all the world will be'
01:46 - I hear 'the cords Romeo' instead of 'the cords that Romeo bid'
01:53 - I hear 'wring my hands', not 'wring thy hands'
02:38 - Repeat 'To prison, eyes'
03:48 - I hear 'the spirit of such a fiend' instead of 'the spirit of a fiend'
03:54 - I hear 'was ever a book' instead of 'was ever book'
04:03 - I hear 'such a gorgeous place' rather than 'such a gorgeous palace'
04:18 - I hear 'what a beast I was' instead of 'what a beast was I'
04:22 - I hear 'And shall I' instead of 'I shall'
05:49 - sounds like 'might have been moved' rather than might have moved'
06:12 - I hear 'no words that woe sound' instead of 'no words cna that woe sound'
06:46 - I hear 'shall take my maidenhead' instead of 'take my maidenhead'
06:53 - I hear 'And give this ring' instead of 'Give this ring'
07:14 - sounds like 'nightingale, not the lark', not 'nightingale, and not the lark'
07:41 - I hear 'need'st not be gone' instead of 'needst not to be gone'
07:58 - I hear 'this is not so' instead of 'this doth not so'
08:10 - is read 'arm in arm' instead of 'arm from arm'
08:16 - I hear 'hence to the hunt's' instead of 'hence with hunt's'
08:55 - sound like 'O, by this count it shall be much years' instead of 'O, by this count I shall be mych in years'
09:25 - I hear 'men call the' instead of 'all men call the'
09:26 - half a line is missing 'If thou art fickle'
10:05 - I hear 'I cannot choose' instead of 'Cannot choose'
11:38 - 'ere he, that should be my husband' instead of 'ere he, that should be husband'
11:42 - I hear 'that I shall not marry yet' instead of 'I will not marry yet'
12:13 - I hear 'with good patience' and the text says 'with patience'
13:40 - there is a pause mid-line (mid-sentence) between 'hath praised' and 'him with'
13:55 - I hear 'have the power to die' instead of 'have power to die'

Well read!
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Post by mb »

Thanks Kathrine! Romeo acts 3 and 5 have been fixed and reuploaded.

I don't know how those two scenes went missing. I've just done them again, kind of hurriedly - I hope they're okay. If not, I'll happily re-record, but I don't want to hold anything up!
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Pl notes Romeo act 3:
04:47 - repeat 'and what and what'
06:31 - I hear 'for some sweet discourses' instead of 'for sweet discourses'

Well read, I look forward to hear you and Juliet together! :)
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Post by DSayers »

Has there been a PL of the Friar's lines in Acts 2 and 3? I'm about to do 4 and 5 tomorrow.

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Romeo act 5 is now PL OK! :D
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Post by mb »

Hi Kathrine,

Romeo act 3 has been fixed and reuploaded (again!). Thanks for being so thorough!
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Romeo act 3 is now PL OK! :D :thumbs: Great job!
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Post by catrose »

Thank you mb and Katherine! :D
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If there isn't one already, I'm happy to be a DPL once all sections are recorded.
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Here are Friar Laurence's lines for Act 4. Also included is "Friar Laurence, read by Denny Sayers" at the beginning.

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/al/romeoandjuliet_Friar_4.mp3

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Post by ccfpcl »

Hi Cat

Happy to do some WP PL but not clear what you still need. Table says R&J both still needed, but recent posts suggest they've been done. What about Nurse? Other?

Thanks, Chris
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