COMPLETE: Jane Eyre (dramatic read) by Charlotte Brontë - ek

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libraryanne wrote:Chap 11

At 2:44 I heard “I was not there long”
Text is “I was not long there.”
Thanks, Betty! I've fixed the word order, and all should be okay now:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/janeeyre_adele_11.mp3

libraryanne wrote:I notice that you say Monsieur for the english “Mr.” in this file. I think this is in keeping with Adele’s character, but I just want to let Elizabeth know in case she prefers you to say mister
Yes, I just read it as I thought she'd say it, but I'll certainly be happy to change it, if need be.

libraryanne wrote:Chapters 12 through 15 are all very PL OK. Your French is superb!
Thank you so much!! That's encouraging to hear. :D
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Post by libraryanne »

Hi,

I've PL'ed the remaining Adele files and..


Chap 16 and 18 are both PL OK

Chap 17 PL OK but at 0:48 says “Monsieur” for “Mr.”


Chap 24

has Monsieur for “Mr.” At beginning and at 0:18

At 1:06 missing “her” in “But you can’t get her there, there is no road to the moon.”

I checked chapter 11 and that glitch is fine now.
Very well done. :) I'll wait to mark chapters 11 and 17 as PL OK until Elizabeth lets us know what she'd like for you to say. :)



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libraryanne wrote:Hi,

I've PL'ed the remaining Adele files and..


Chap 16 and 18 are both PL OK

Chap 17 PL OK but at 0:48 says “Monsieur” for “Mr.”


Chap 24

has Monsieur for “Mr.” At beginning and at 0:18

At 1:06 missing “her” in “But you can’t get her there, there is no road to the moon.”

I checked chapter 11 and that glitch is fine now.
Very well done. :) I'll wait to mark chapters 11 and 17 as PL OK until Elizabeth lets us know what she'd like for you to say. :)



Betty
Thank you for all the great work, Betty and Tiffany!

I think saying "monsieur" in the first few chapters makes sense, especially because Adele is just getting to know Jane and is all excited to have someone with whom she can speak French :) By Chapter 24, Jane has probably drilled it into her head that she should at least say "Mr." instead of "Monsieur" and, since you have to edit chapter 24 anyway, Tiffany, could you please change all the "monsieurs" into that chapter to "Misters?"

Thanks! :clap:
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Hi again,

I've PL'ed Mr Rochester file chap. 14 and


At 1:38 I heard “bidden” for “forbidden” in “I have forbidden Adele to talk to me about her presents….

At 1:54 missing “have” in “Now I have performed the part of a good host.”

At 3:17 I think I heard “softering” instead of “softening” in
“And so, under pretence of softening the previous ourage..” [not sure on this one]


At 8:10 I heard “are” rather than “must” in “Leaving superiority out of the question, the, you must still agree to receive my orders now and then..”

At 12:34 missing “but” in
“..that you listen with no malevolent scorn of their indiscretion, but with a kind of innate sympathy


Great reading, Algy!

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musicalheart1 wrote:I think saying "monsieur" in the first few chapters makes sense, especially because Adele is just getting to know Jane and is all excited to have someone with whom she can speak French By Chapter 24, Jane has probably drilled it into her head that she should at least say "Mr." instead of "Monsieur" and, since you have to edit chapter 24 anyway, Tiffany, could you please change all the "monsieurs" into that chapter to "Misters?"
No problem! Here's the edited chapter 24 file:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/janeeyre_adele_24.mp3

I think I've got it all fixed now...but I'll certainly redo again, if not! :oops:

Thank you!!
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libraryanne wrote:At 3:17 I think I heard “softering” instead of “softening” in
“And so, under pretence of softening the previous ourage..” [not sure on this one]
That is supposed to be outrage. I'll fix it in the GoogleDoc! :roll:

EDIT: Huh. The GoogleDoc definitely says "outrage." Tres bizarre!
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Hi

Adele chapter 24 is all set now! :thumbs:

Lord Ingram file is PL OK too! :)

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libraryanne wrote:Hi

Adele chapter 24 is all set now! :thumbs:

Lord Ingram file is PL OK too! :)

Betty
Thanks, Betty!
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libraryanne wrote:Hi again,

I've PL'ed Mr Rochester file chap. 14

Betty
Thanks Betty

Here is the corrected Chapter 14:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/janeeyre_rochester_14.mp3
20:59

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Algy Pug wrote:
libraryanne wrote:Hi again,

I've PL'ed Mr Rochester file chap. 14

Betty
Thanks Betty

Here is the corrected Chapter 14:

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/janeeyre_rochester_14.mp3
20:59

Cheers

Algy
Thank you, Algy. MW updated!
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Chapter 30 of St John is now uploaded:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/janeeyre_stjohnrivers_30.mp3

Hopefully I can tackle my remaining few sections over the next few days. :)
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aidanbrack wrote:Chapter 30 of St John is now uploaded:
http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/ek/janeeyre_stjohnrivers_30.mp3

Hopefully I can tackle my remaining few sections over the next few days. :)
Thank you!
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Post by Kristingj »

Mrs reed Chapter 1, 2, 4 and 21 is fixed and uploaded:)
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Kristingj wrote:Mrs reed Chapter 1, 2, 4 and 21 is fixed and uploaded:)
Thank you!

Betty, I will PL these ASAP.
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