For Section 14
don't know how important it is but "Book 1" is missing from the intro: "Chapter [number] of The Well at the World's End, Book 1 The Road Unto Love."
and there is a repetition at 03:05-03:11 "and Ralph told what he would, and that was but little."
Section 15: PL-OK
Section 17: PL-OK
Although the language is a tough read, you both did a great job!
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ETA: just a small note about the Title Tag of Section 17, there's a "- db2" in the end, don't know what it means