[COMPLETE] Stand by for Mars! by Carey Rockwell - sp

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seanohara
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lomond wrote: Chapters 3 and 4 are PL OK!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Thank you, and you too.
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Greetings -

Section 5 is PL OK!

Nice pick up of reading speed during the fist fight, Sean.

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Three new chapters uploaded:

Chapter 6: http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/sp/standbyformars_06_rockwell.mp3
Length: 21:55

Chapter 7: http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/sp/standbyformars_07_rockwell.mp3
Length: 8:57

Chapter 8: http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/sp/standbyformars_08_rockwell.mp3
Length: 8:15

I've finished recording all the chapters, so now it's just a matter of editing.
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Greetings -

Just a quick note to let you know that I haven't given up on the project. I prepare income tax returns for folks so things have gotten a bit hectic lately. Will get back to work on this in the next few days.

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seanohara wrote:Three new chapters uploaded:

Chapter 6: http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/sp/standbyformars_06_rockwell.mp3 Length: 21:55.
Greetings -

Tech specs, audio, and ID3 are all good.

Three minor notes:

Time: 00:44 and 00:53. The reading has "Commander" before Walters in these two cases, but the text does not.

Time: 18:56 "I suppose you think your Unit 77-K will finish on top?" Reading has "47-K" instead of "77-K".

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Greetings -

Section 7 notes:

Tech specs, ID3, and audio are good. One word substitution noted: Time: 07:07 "You couldn't have made it without working as a unit." Reading has "being" instead of "working as".

Otherwise, PL OK!

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Greetings -

Chapter 8 is PL OK!

Sounding good, Sean.

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Greetings -

Chapter 9 is PL OK!

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seanohara wrote:Sorry about the delay, but here are chapters 10 and 11:

Chapter 10 - 21:56

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/sp/standbyformars_10_rockwell.mp3
Greetings -

And, likewise, sorry for the delay. Life got in the way of LibriVox.

Tech specs, audio, and tags good.

One minor word substitution:

Time: 14:30 "took it in stride and sent it soaring for a forty-five-yard goal." Reading has "foot" instead of "yard".

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seanohara wrote:Here are chapters 10 and 11:


Chapter 11 - 17:56

http://upload.librivox.org/share/uploads/sp/standbyformars_11_rockwell.mp3
Greetings -

Tech specs, audio, tags, and reading all fine.

PL OK!

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seanohara wrote:Here's a new batch of chapters.

Chapter 12, length 13:42
Greetings -

Tech specs, audio, and tags AOK.

PL OK except for three minor word substitutions. Doubt if they are worth toiling over, but I leave it to you, Sean.

Time: 2:06 "Satisfied, he fastened his eyes on the SWEEP HAND of the time clock." Reading has "of the" inserted between "sweep" and "hand".

Time: 3:13 "said Tom, turning back eagerly to THE control board." Reading has "his" instead of "the".

Time: 4:00 "Listen, you rocket-headed grease monkey..." Reading inserts "here" after "listen".

On to the next chapter.

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