SOLO - The Queen's Cup, by G. A. Henty - kd

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » October 23rd, 2024, 1:01 pm

Chapter 5 is uploaded!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » October 23rd, 2024, 5:24 pm

Section 4 is PL OK

Hey, I will be traveling until Tuesday. My PL'ing is likely to be slow. I'll catch 5 tomorrow during our layover, assuming my phone connects through alright.

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » October 26th, 2024, 12:33 pm

Hi, Grace! I'm not marking Section 5 yet, because I can't check it's technically al specs and front/end silences until Tuesday,but the reading part is great.

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » October 29th, 2024, 1:24 pm

Yes, Section 5 is PL OK

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » November 8th, 2024, 4:53 pm

Chapter 6 is uploaded!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 9th, 2024, 10:06 am

Hi, Grace

I've marked ch. 6 as PL OK

But I have a "style note," and if you agree about making that little edit, I'm happy to spot-PL.

at 18:03, as a listener, it seems that the story would greatly benefit by more silence being between these sentences, since a good span of time occurs between the first paragraph and the next:

"I won't flatter you by telling you whether a red or a black one." ---------- "Who are the party going to be, Mallett?" his friend Colonel Severn said, as they stood together on the deck of the Osprey early in August.

A silence of a couple of seconds would provide the listener with the sense of separation in time and space between those two different scenes.

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » November 14th, 2024, 2:00 pm

Thanks for the style note! Yeah, I remember editing that part and wasn't sure how long of a pause I should leave there. I added some time and re-uploaded it!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 14th, 2024, 3:41 pm

Ahh

That's quite nice.

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » November 22nd, 2024, 1:36 pm

Chapter 7 is uploaded!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 25th, 2024, 11:17 am

Chapter 7 is PL OK

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » November 29th, 2024, 1:10 pm

Chapter 8 is uploaded.

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » November 29th, 2024, 2:51 pm

And Chapter 9 as well!

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 30th, 2024, 12:22 pm

Chapter 8 is PL OK

Very nicely recorded.

(back soon for 9)

LCaulkins · Post by **LCaulkins** » November 30th, 2024, 3:57 pm

Boo! Hissssss!

Nasty guy!

but ch. 9 is PL OK

gracesilvey · Post by **gracesilvey** » November 30th, 2024, 5:38 pm

Haha, I know right?!

I wanted to say “Atta girl!” after Bertha’s very much deserved reproofs to Carthew.