(FULL) [Group] Poetry: A Magazine of Verse, Vol. 20, No. 6, Sep., 1922-mas

Short Poetry Collections, Short Story Collections, and our Weekly Poetry Project
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Dear Ehsan, thank you for your feedback and I'll do all necessary corrections. Thank you for your compliments, it gives me self confidence to continue reading.😊😊
But one thing, how did you know why I love this review ? Because of my family name? Or because I'm Armenian?
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https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_49_128kb.mp3

Here is the link of corrected file of section 49, Asia review
file lengthy: 4:57 minutes
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section 43-On Translating Chinese Poetry: II, a comment by Eunice Tietjens

08:44
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ArmReader wrote: July 6th, 2024, 7:50 am Dear Ehsan, thank you for your feedback and I'll do all necessary corrections. Thank you for your compliments, it gives me self confidence to continue reading.😊😊
But one thing, how did you know why I love this review? Because of my family name? Or because I'm Armenian?
My pleasure :9:

You told me yourself :lol:
ArmReader wrote: July 4th, 2024, 3:14 am I like this review...
Your intonation is super considering you are Armenian... but I couldn't place the accent, sounded slightly American to me!
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ArmReader wrote: July 6th, 2024, 9:51 am https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_49_128kb.mp3

Here is the link of corrected file of section 49, Asia review
file lengthy: 4:57 minutes
Anita, there are still some issues, like your speech gotta start within the limit of one-second of silence, not after one second. Second, your dB volume is still 94 dB. Please use the checker software each time before uploading your sections. You can download it here for free: https://cgjennings.ca/projects/checker/

But for now, I edited out the silence and reduced the dB volume for you and also added a DeHummer effect to get rid of the room reverb. :D Your section is PL OKay :thumbs:
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Thank you so much for your editing, I swear God, I did the dB change I don't know why it didn't work! and for the other DeHummer effect, honestly I couldn't find it in Audacity.
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May I read 44-46?
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adrianstephens wrote: July 8th, 2024, 11:29 pm May I read 44-46?
Thank you. MW Updated.
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ehsanesque wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:21 am
adrianstephens wrote: July 8th, 2024, 11:29 pm May I read 44-46?
Thank you. MW Updated.
Here's the first: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_44_128kb.mp3 10:24
Regards,
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ehsanesque wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:21 am
adrianstephens wrote: July 8th, 2024, 11:29 pm May I read 44-46?
Thank you. MW Updated.
And the remaining two:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_45_128kb.mp3 4:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_46_128kb.mp3 3:50
My Librivox-related YouTube series starts here: Part 0: Introduction. https://youtu.be/pMHYycgA5VU
...
Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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MorphineLolly wrote: July 7th, 2024, 12:56 am section 43-On Translating Chinese Poetry: II, a comment by Eunice Tietjens

08:44
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_43_128kb_mp.mp3
Nice to see a fellow Audible user. :)

I have some PL notes for you:

first- please rename your file and remove the "_mp" before .mp3

- the silence at the beginning is 01.151 seconds. Can you reduce it below 1 second? make it around 700-800 milliseconds.

- at 0:36 and subsequently -- please change the pronunciation of "Giles"- it should G as in Gigi

- at 0:57 "Poet" should be plural. Please revise.

- at 1:34 - you missed "goes" in "so far as my knowledge goes"

- at 1:59 you pronunced "sinologue" as "sunoluug" but it should be "cinolog"

- at 2:42 and 5:42 you say "verse free" but it should be " free-verse"

- at 3:08 "reach" should be followed by "it" and please a second silence before "L. Cranmer-Byng"

- at 3:43 you say "la verde de jade" but the text reads "Le Livre de Jade" - please note the difference between La and Le

- at 4:04 I hear you say "dreadful drogol" but the text reads "doggerel" which is pronounced "dogarel"

- at 4:30 "Yet" should after the space not before it since it starts the next paragraph.

- at 6:11 you pronounce "supplanted" as "supolated"

- at 6:22 you read "weaver's bloom" but text reads "weavers loom"

- at 8:32 please add some silence before saying the outro ("end of..")
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adrianstephens wrote: July 9th, 2024, 7:37 am
ehsanesque wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:21 am
adrianstephens wrote: July 8th, 2024, 11:29 pm May I read 44-46?
Thank you. MW Updated.
Here's the first: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_44_128kb.mp3 10:24
Regards,
Adrian
Hello Adrian. Thank you very much for the prompt turn ins. I have some PL notes. :)

at 0:45 and 1:14 - 1914 is pronounced 1940

at 1:16 the proper pronunciation would be "ve-ow djoe" ( /vjø/ /ʒø/)

Everything else is beyond my expectations. Thank you, Adrian
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adrianstephens wrote: July 10th, 2024, 3:11 am
ehsanesque wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:21 am
adrianstephens wrote: July 8th, 2024, 11:29 pm May I read 44-46?
Thank you. MW Updated.
And the remaining two:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_45_128kb.mp3 4:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_46_128kb.mp3 3:50

at 2:07 of Section 46 there is a repetition of "Nevertheless" but I edited that out and reuploaded myself. So these two are PL Okay. :thumbs:
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ehsanesque wrote: July 11th, 2024, 3:06 am
adrianstephens wrote: July 9th, 2024, 7:37 am
ehsanesque wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:21 am

Thank you. MW Updated.
Here's the first: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_44_128kb.mp3 10:24
Regards,
Adrian
Hello Adrian. Thank you very much for the prompt turn ins. I have some PL notes. :)

at 0:45 and 1:14 - 1914 is pronounced 1940

at 1:16 the proper pronunciation would be "ve-ow djoe" ( /vjø/ /ʒø/)

Everything else is beyond my expectations. Thank you, Adrian
Here is the corrected version: https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_44_128kb.mp3
I made the corrections related to the dates, but not the second.

Assuming these words are french, then I believe my pronunciation is sufficiently accurate french.
IMHO, this youtube agrees sufficiently: https://youtu.be/_8OIjGjwqI4

Regards,
Adrian
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ehsanesque wrote: July 11th, 2024, 3:48 am
adrianstephens wrote: July 10th, 2024, 3:11 am
ehsanesque wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:21 am

Thank you. MW Updated.
And the remaining two:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_45_128kb.mp3 4:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/poetryv20n6_46_128kb.mp3 3:50

at 2:07 of Section 46 there is a repetition of "Nevertheless" but I edited that out and reuploaded myself. So these two are PL Okay. :thumbs:
Thank you for doing the editing for me.
Regards,
Adrian
My Librivox-related YouTube series starts here: Part 0: Introduction. https://youtu.be/pMHYycgA5VU
...
Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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