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AgnesRobert wrote: June 28th, 2024, 8:01 pm hello, may I please be

49 Doughnut Lady (Gender neutral) - Chapter 18

and if you would like I can also be this somewhat unpleasant woman

38 Miss Jerusha (Female) - Chapter 4 and 7
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Hey there! Great work on Mrs Pepper! Just one a couple small PL notes Please do try to keep about 3-5 seconds between each line. You did fantastic, just every now and then there's a line or two that ran together.

Chapter 1:
@1:52 (needs a pause between lines)

Chapter 3:
@0:10

Chapter 4:
Actually needs the pause removed, @about 23 seconds between the lines "and set the table back—seventy-five what, Joel?”
@ 1:57 - Sounds like a phone notification pops in
@ 2:46, needs a pause
@ 2:57, needs a pause removed
@ 3:34, needs a pause
@ 3:48, needs a pause
@ 3:50, needs a pause
@ 4:01, needs a pause
@ 4:03, needs a pause
@ 4:08, needs a pause
@ 4:35, needs a pause
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victoriaalicebell wrote: June 13th, 2024, 8:17 am Polly, Chapter 1. (4:26)
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_polly_1.mp3
More coming soon.
Excellent job with Polly! You suit her role very, very well! :D

I have just two PL notes:

@ 0:59 Two missing lines:
Line 1: “Yes, I would too!”
Line 2: “two hundred of 'em, if I had a chance; all at once, so there, Joey Pepper!”

@ 1:57 Missing line: “What, Phronsie?”

Thank you!
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doughnut lady

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_doughnutlady_18.mp3 (0:24)

miss jerusha (found her name pronounced both with a J like in Jeremiah and like a J in Jose; I looked at all the other names in the piece and guessed the first way but if we are going the other way tell me and I'll fix it)

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_missjerusha_4.mp3 (1:23)

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_missjerusha_7.mp3 (3:05)
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AgnesRobert wrote: July 1st, 2024, 3:34 pm doughnut lady

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_doughnutlady_18.mp3 (0:24)

miss jerusha (found her name pronounced both with a J like in Jeremiah and like a J in Jose; I looked at all the other names in the piece and guessed the first way but if we are going the other way tell me and I'll fix it)

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_missjerusha_4.mp3 (1:23)

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_missjerusha_7.mp3 (3:05)
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May I read Mr. Whitney?
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Salvationist wrote: July 4th, 2024, 4:42 pm May I read Mr. Whitney?
Absolutely! Thank you
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Here's Mr. Whitney:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_mrwhitney_25.mp3 6:08

It seems that not all of the coding in Chapter 25 indicates the correct speakers. I did not record the line "Papa—oh, papa!" even though it is highlighted in orange, because the context suggests to me that it is Van speaking, and so should be highlighted in pink. I recorded ten lines coded for Mrs. Whitney because I believe that the intended speaker is Mr. Whitney. I also noticed that the line "All!" is coded for the narrator but I believe that it should be coded for Polly. Please let me know if I have misunderstood anything in the text or if I have missed any lines.

Is there any chance that you will be coordinating a DR of the sequel when this project concludes, Elijah? I would love to return as Mr. Whitney in Five Little Peppers Midway.
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Salvationist wrote: July 9th, 2024, 5:11 pm Here's Mr. Whitney:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/fivelittlepeppers_mrwhitney_25.mp3 6:08

It seems that not all of the coding in Chapter 25 indicates the correct speakers. I did not record the line "Papa—oh, papa!" even though it is highlighted in orange, because the context suggests to me that it is Van speaking, and so should be highlighted in pink. I recorded ten lines coded for Mrs. Whitney because I believe that the intended speaker is Mr. Whitney. I also noticed that the line "All!" is coded for the narrator but I believe that it should be coded for Polly. Please let me know if I have misunderstood anything in the text or if I have missed any lines.

Is there any chance that you will be coordinating a DR of the sequel when this project concludes, Elijah? I would love to return as Mr. Whitney in Five Little Peppers Midway.
Thank you for the file, and for bringing this to my attention. I'll look into it shortly and adjust the lines as needed. I appreciate your insight and looking into that, I'll be sure to not the clarifications or edits if there are any.

As for the sequel, I am not positive right now. There are a couple of other books within my list of hoping to complete someday, but that could be one later down the road. :D
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All files awaiting PL will be getting PL'ed over the next two days. I appreciate everyone's patience.
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May I also read the Porter?
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