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BrianFullen wrote: May 21st, 2024, 2:50 pm Hi Winnifred

Section 21, aka Part 3, c, is up and ready for PL (14:23) at location:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_21_frank_128kb.mp3


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_22_frank_128kb.mp3, at 24:22, is ready for PL!

Cheers,
Brian
Section 21 needs one fix: at 13:37, there’s a weird hiccup that almost swallows the second “was” in the phrase “then indeed my will was mastered by a greater and was good.”

Section 22 is PL OK.

You might want to flesh out your description of the book.

Cheers,
Winnifred
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Winnifred wrote: May 25th, 2024, 1:35 pm
BrianFullen wrote: May 21st, 2024, 2:50 pm Hi Winnifred

Section 21, aka Part 3, c, is up and ready for PL (14:23) at location:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_21_frank_128kb.mp3


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_22_frank_128kb.mp3, at 24:22, is ready for PL!

Cheers,
Brian
Section 21 needs one fix: at 13:37, there’s a weird hiccup that almost swallows the second “was” in the phrase “then indeed my will was mastered by a greater and was good.”

Section 22 is PL OK.

You might want to flesh out your description of the book.

Cheers,

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_21_frank_128kb.mp3
revised and uploaded - r/t is 14:24.21 was 14:23.14.

I didn't hear a hiccup but the 'w' sound was indistinct. I thought maybe it needed amped but it simply wasn't there. I checked the raw recording and that's just the way I said it. Best I can tell I rushed the line trying to be dramatic, maybe. I copied the word 'was' from the earlier line that started "I was no sickly repentant ..." pasted it over the second 'was' in the problematic line and with a fade or two I think it's okay now. Thanks.

Ready for spot PL.

I want to stick with the 'revised' summary that I did: "A young alienist exposes a murderer. ". I think that's fine.

Cheers.
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BrianFullen wrote: May 25th, 2024, 2:56 pm
Winnifred wrote: May 25th, 2024, 1:35 pm
BrianFullen wrote: May 21st, 2024, 2:50 pm Hi Winnifred

Section 21, aka Part 3, c, is up and ready for PL (14:23) at location:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_21_frank_128kb.mp3


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_22_frank_128kb.mp3, at 24:22, is ready for PL!

Cheers,
Brian
Section 21 needs one fix: at 13:37, there’s a weird hiccup that almost swallows the second “was” in the phrase “then indeed my will was mastered by a greater and was good.”

Section 22 is PL OK.

You might want to flesh out your description of the book.

Cheers,

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/chalkface_21_frank_128kb.mp3
revised and uploaded - r/t is 14:24.21 was 14:23.14.

I didn't hear a hiccup but the 'w' sound was indistinct. I thought maybe it needed amped but it simply wasn't there. I checked the raw recording and that's just the way I said it. Best I can tell I rushed the line trying to be dramatic, maybe. I copied the word 'was' from the earlier line that started "I was no sickly repentant ..." pasted it over the second 'was' in the problematic line and with a fade or two I think it's okay now. Thanks.

Ready for spot PL.

I want to stick with the 'revised' summary that I did: "A young alienist exposes a murderer. ". I think that's fine.

Cheers.
Ok, spot PL OK now. I just wondered whether you mightn't attract more listeners if you gave a hint about this story containing the bizarre internal meanderings of a troubled mind or something like that. Otherwise, it sounds like it's just a run-of-the-mill murder mystery, which it certainly isn't... But that's your call, of course.

Cheers,
Winnifred
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And congrats on completing your first solo! Well done.

Cheers,
Winnifred
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Winnifred wrote: May 25th, 2024, 3:35 pm And congrats on completing your first solo! Well done.

Cheers,
Thanks. I started a solo almost two years ago ... but it was really a stealth attempt at a closed group play project. I have these friends who seemed very interested and I'm not saying that they aren't at this point in time. It's just that despite repeated requests by me for one-on-one recording sessions they, or at least the more vociferous ones, insisted on group recording sessions, delivering lines around a table. It sucked. The sound was bad and it was impossible to keep down the background. Every session turned into a party at some point and I'm not the type that likes to tell others what they ought to be doing anyway. So, eventually it did become an LV open collab one act play called The White Christmas and once I recast it that way it zoomed to completion and made last year's Christmas shorts collection. I liked it.

I've done several projects as BC that turned out to me recording all but one or two of the sections. I didn't plan on that .... I guess it just turned out that way because the books I launched weren't as interesting to others readers as I thought they might be. I did have some really outstanding help on Death of the Gods and was happy to have the folks who joined because I thought they were exceptional. Even still, I read a lot more on that collab than on this solo. I think it's cool that others like to do solos but I can't say I feel the same about them. I only did this one because I thought it would fill downtime while I was waiting for content on The Ring Cycle and on Gold-Killer.

I don't mean to be ungrateful because I know you meant to be encouraging. But truth be told I'd much rather do plays and DR's than solos. I like the PL and editing quite a bit.

Oh, yeah, and those group sessions with friends weren't a total waste. I did get enough material recorded in one of them to put together a section for a Parody Outline of History which was my first BC and which was MC' d by Jo. Thanks Jo!

Cheers.
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Hi Jo,

Thanks in advance for cataloging. I hope and pray it goes smooth ... actually I'm sure it will go smooth 'cause Winnifred did a fine job of PL.

Once again, I am in your debt,

Brian
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Congratulations Brian on completion of this solo recording for LibriVox! This book is now in the LibriVox catalog and available for listeners to download. Please check the catalog page and let me know if any changes are needed:

https://librivox.org/chalk-face-by-waldo-frank/
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knotyouraveragejo wrote: May 26th, 2024, 10:43 pm Congratulations Brian on completion of this solo recording for LibriVox! This book is now in the LibriVox catalog and available for listeners to download. Please check the catalog page and let me know if any changes are needed:

https://librivox.org/chalk-face-by-waldo-frank/
Thanks so much, Jo. I guess section 1 title cannot be left blank or called simply, "Chalk Face". In that case, can it be called "Prologue" since that term best describes its function.

By way of explanation: The author, Waldo Frank, wants us to believe that the text of the book is a sort of manifesto written by a fictional character named John Mark. If we cannot call section 1 "Chalk Face" for some reason, then I'd much prefer that the section be "Prologue" which is effectively the purpose that it serves. In fact, the author and his publisher certainly could have called that fist section a term such as Introduction, Preface, Prologue, etc. but they chose not to do that for whatever reason they may have had. I don't feel great about applying a label one hundred years after the fact, but if we must because of some LV policy of which I was not aware, then my choice would be to either call it "Chalk Face" or if that's not acceptable then I suppose that "Prologue" would suffice, though, as I said, I don't feel particularly good about countermanding an author and their publisher.

Thank you so much for all you do and for getting this book into the catalog.

To be clear, I definitely don't like either Preface or Introduction because I think those terms are misleading in the matter of this particular book.

Best wishes,
Brian
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Hi Brian. Leaving the title of section 1 blank will mean that listeners will see nothing as the title of the section when they listen. That would be somewhat odd if not confusing. I can change it to Prologue if that is what you prefer.
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knotyouraveragejo wrote: May 27th, 2024, 4:43 pm You can see the change here

https://librivox.org/chalk-face-by-waldo-frank/
Thanks Jo!
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