COMPLETE The Moon Terror by Albert Birch - kd

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 24th, 2024, 4:36 pm

Please review Chapter 10 of The Moon Terror

duration 07:26

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_10_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks a bunch

don

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 24th, 2024, 5:31 pm

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 24th, 2024, 4:36 pm Please review Chapter 10 of The Moon Terror

duration 07:26

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_10_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks a bunch

don

Very nice; chapter 10s pl OK

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 24th, 2024, 6:55 pm

Please review Chapter 11 of The Moon Terror

duration 10:27

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_11_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the great help!!

don

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 25th, 2024, 11:00 am

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 24th, 2024, 6:55 pm Please review Chapter 11 of The Moon Terror

duration 10:27

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_11_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the great help!!

don

Chapter 11's PL OK

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 25th, 2024, 1:09 pm

Please review chapter 12

Duration 16:59
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_12_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 25th, 2024, 5:51 pm

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 25th, 2024, 1:09 pm Please review chapter 12

Duration 16:59
https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_12_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don

Chapter XII PL Note:

07:09: "From" is a bit clipped, "From one large, enclosed object..."

09:15: repeat of "the solution of the puzzle"

You really flew through this second half

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 25th, 2024, 6:14 pm

Please review Chapter 13 and the end of The Moon Terror

Duration 17:49.5

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_13_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the great help and encouragement

don

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 26th, 2024, 10:02 am

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 25th, 2024, 6:14 pm Please review Chapter 13 and the end of The Moon Terror

Duration 17:49.5

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_13_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the great help and encouragement

don

Chapter 13 PL Notes
02:03: word "to" is clipped out, heard "...vast wind was starting blow out of the east;"

07:17: double suddenly, "when **suddenly** the celestial suddenly jerked the knife..."

Well, just those two and the chapter 12 notes and we're done.
Congratz Don

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 26th, 2024, 1:07 pm

Corrections for Chapter 13

duration now 17:49

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_13_birch_128kb.mp3

I'll do Chapter 12 Next

Thanks

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 26th, 2024, 1:28 pm

Chapter 12 corrections

Duration 16:58

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_12_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the compliment. Now if I can just learn to speak clearly, I'll have this mastered

Your help was greatly appreciated

Now to find another project...any suggestions

don

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 26th, 2024, 2:19 pm

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 26th, 2024, 1:07 pm Corrections for Chapter 13

duration now 17:49

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_13_birch_128kb.mp3

I'll do Chapter 12 Next

Thanks

Chapter 13s PL OK now

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 26th, 2024, 2:28 pm

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 26th, 2024, 1:28 pm Chapter 12 corrections

Duration 16:58

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_12_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the compliment. Now if I can just learn to speak clearly, I'll have this mastered

Your help was greatly appreciated

Now to find another project...any suggestions

don

Great Chapter 12s PL OK

Seems like one of the hardest parts really; I find myself tripping over words for no reason whatsoever. It seems like just in this one story you seem to have improved, more comfortable or something.

No suggestions at the moment. I've never actually thoroughly looked though the magazines, something Ive wanted to do for a while.

I'll send you a message if I find anything.

PeeWeeVO007 · Post by **PeeWeeVO007** » May 26th, 2024, 3:43 pm

I think I am getting some good habits, like reading through a section first to understand its direction. Some of that 1920;s pros will give you whiplash with the long sentences and reverse structures

Thanks again for your fine work

Apophennec · Post by **Apophennec** » May 26th, 2024, 4:59 pm

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: ↑May 26th, 2024, 3:43 pm I think I am getting some good habits, like reading through a section first to understand its direction. Some of that 1920;s pros will give you whiplash with the long sentences and reverse structures

Thanks again for your fine work

hahah you're not kidding. I find some older writing can really pelt you with lonnnggg sentences; the servants must've breathed for them

Post by **KiltedDragon** » May 27th, 2024, 5:04 am

All done and cataloged. Good job to both of you.

This project is now complete! All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/the-moon-terror-by-albert-g-birch/