[SOLO] Shifting Sands by Sara Ware Bassett - dc

Roger · Post by **Roger** » May 25th, 2024, 12:42 pm

And chapter 10 has been posted, where we get to know some town folk through the usual method - town gossip. Also a thwarted plan.

Thanks!

lvictoria · Post by **lvictoria** » May 25th, 2024, 5:09 pm

The whole map conversation was hilarious. And poor Eleazer...

I don't know that the following matters but I'll make mention just in case. If it's okay as is then this chapter is PL OK
~17:21 "Drat it!" raged he, as he strode off across the sand.-- I hear drove for strode.

Roger · Post by **Roger** » May 26th, 2024, 9:13 am

Yes, loved the map sequence and the rummaging through the pockets.

And to think I almost made it to the end. Oh well, chapter 10, patched and re-uploaded.
Thanks so much!!

lvictoria · Post by **lvictoria** » May 27th, 2024, 1:44 pm

Chapter 10 is PL OK

Can't wait to see what the town's folk have to gossip about in the next chapter.

Roger · Post by **Roger** » June 5th, 2024, 10:48 am

In chapter 11, which has now been posted, we learn precisely how the legal system operates in Wilton.
Particular attention should be paid to the various statutes and ordinances as they apply.
I hope you enjoy.

Thanks!!

lvictoria · Post by **lvictoria** » June 5th, 2024, 1:59 pm

This time I'm going to have to say poor Elisha!

It's going to be entertaining to see how this actually goes down, proper attire and all.

Chapter 11 is PL OK