[COMPLTE] Tejas, la primera desmembración de Méjico, por Carlos Pereyra - brrot

[vviera]

I just saw this got put into the Readers Wanted: Languages other than English forum rather than Going Solo. Can that be changed? We seem to be getting more and more new readers in Spanish, and I don't want them to be confused when they see it in Readers Wanted.

[brownrottger]

I just saw this got put into the Readers Wanted: Languages other than English forum rather than Going Solo. Can that be changed? We seem to be getting more and more new readers in Spanish, and I don't want them to be confused when they see it in Readers Wanted.

Yeah I noticed that too so I fixed it. Thanks!

[DrSpoke]

Hola Claudia, he subido secciones 3 y 4 para tu revisión.

Gracias y saludos.

Ambas sin errores: PL OK.

[mpinedag]

Hola Claudia, dos secciones más hacen su entrada: S05 - S06

Gracias y saludos.

[mpinedag]

Hi Claudia, he subido otras tres secciones: 7-9.
¡Buen fin de semana!

[DrSpoke]

Hi Claudia, he subido otras tres secciones: 7-9.
¡Buen fin de semana!

Hola Mario, igualmente.
Todas las secciones desparraman verde en MW (tras desparramar rojo por otros lados..).

[mpinedag]

Hi Claudia, he subido otras tres secciones: 7-9.
¡Buen fin de semana!

Hola Mario, igualmente.
Todas las secciones desparraman verde en MW (tras desparramar rojo por otros lados..).

De acuerdo contigo, Claudia. El rojo de la sangre por ambos bandos. Y estas historias son muy cercanas a mi, habiendo visitado, por motivos familiares o culturales, casi todos los lugares que en ellas se mencionan.

¡Saludos!

[mpinedag]

Hola Claudia, dos secciones más en tu inbox: S10, S11.

¡Saludos!

[DrSpoke]

Y estas historias son muy cercanas a mi, habiendo visitado, por motivos familiares o culturales, casi todos los lugares que en ellas se mencionan.

Well, at least this sections 10-11 chunk gives you an emotional break, hopefully.

Interesting characters, Jackson&co, though by no means unique or ever out of fashion.. Neither out of fashion “insuperables los obstáculos para la anexión” without war approach.
Also interesting the candid arguments (around page 155) behind the “how to's” to join the federal Union.


I agree it’s better to say “don” instead of “d” for the Spanish-Mexican names starting with “D.”, it makes easier for the listener to understand Jackson’s “I hate the dons” quote.

Otherwise, just the following needs to be addressed:

section 11 - page 164 @ 13:53

Audio: No solo Gorostiza, enviado a Méjico, sino también
Text: No solo Gorostiza, enviado de Méjico, sino también


A request:

Could I please carry on without taking care of the Checker passage? I don't usually have wifi; it's bytes-heavier work via phone..

[mpinedag]

Hi Claudia, yes, there was no shortage of annexation justifications. It's very interesting to see the facts told by the losing side, and just a few decades after the events occurred.

And you're also right that spelling out "don" is easier for listeners. I missed that in the first sections, and wanted to redeem myself by spelling it out in the most recent sections.

The mistake at S11 13'53" has been corrected.

I see no issues in your skipping Checker. I use it to validate all my files, so we're covered here.

Thanks!

[DrSpoke]

I see no issues in your skipping Checker. I use it to validate all my files, so we're covered here.

Thanks!

Thanks a lot, Mario.

S11 is spot PL OK

[mpinedag]

Hi Claudia, coming in are sections 12-14. It may be a few days before the last two are submitted, though.

Regards!

[DrSpoke]

Hi Claudia, coming in are sections 12-14. It may be a few days before the last two are submitted, though.

Regards!

Hello. No hurry!
Section 12 is straight ok. Then I have a few notes, but not sure editing is required for all.

Sección 13

Página 184/185 @ 00:21
Audio: Toda la cuestión estaba en reconocer […] de la patraña histórica
Text: Toda la cuestión estaba en reconocer […] de la patraña patriótica

Página 185 @ 01:27 - Falta la frase
Se trataba de algo insuperable.

Sección 14

Página 212 @ 09:08
Audio: los considera violatorios por aquella nación
Text: los considera violados por aquella nación

[mpinedag]

Hi Claudia, coming in are sections 12-14. It may be a few days before the last two are submitted, though.

Regards!

Hello. No hurry!
Section 12 is straight ok. Then I have a few notes, but not sure editing is required for all.

Sección 13

Página 184/185 @ 00:21
Audio: Toda la cuestión estaba en reconocer […] de la patraña histórica
Text: Toda la cuestión estaba en reconocer […] de la patraña patriótica

Página 185 @ 01:27 - Falta la frase
Se trataba de algo insuperable.

Sección 14

Página 212 @ 09:08
Audio: los considera violatorios por aquella nación
Text: los considera violados por aquella nación

Great catches, Claudia!
I can see that they were the result of my intent to wrap the sessions up rather quick...

They've been corrected and re-uploaded, ready for Spot PL.
Regards!

[DrSpoke]

great, we are then at the last two!!