Hello Alan,
Optional PL note
at 1:52 you pronounce "Belleau" as bell-yer, I think it might be as in "bell-low" to rhyme with the previous line.
Otherwise PL OK.
Regards,
Adrian
alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 22nd, 2024, 3:29 am
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Thanks Adrian, my French pronunciation has always been terrible, even when I get the words right French people still can't understand me
PL OK
I've got the reverse problem. My french teacher once said: "Adrian has a beautiful accent, it's a pity he knows nothing to say with it."
Hi Gwen
PL notes:
The text is correct and well read
Please revise your recording to use the shorter intro and outro specified for subsequent sections and leave 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Alan the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose