FULL[Poetry] Flowers of Evil by Baudelaire-ag

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 20th, 2024, 2:24 am

ccam wrote: ↑May 19th, 2024, 3:48 pm Here is Section 42
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_42_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
Duration: 01:11

I have marked this PL OK! as the text is correct, but I had to make some adjustments and clean off the background noise which was considerable. For future recordings you could try reducing the background noise yourself.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 20th, 2024, 2:25 am

Section 2 is Ready for PL! if someone would check it for me

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_02_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
3.59

brucek · Post by **brucek** » May 20th, 2024, 5:54 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 20th, 2024, 2:25 am Section 2 is Ready for PL! if someone would check it for me

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_02_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
3.59

Section 2 is PL OK, Alan.

Bruce.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 20th, 2024, 5:55 am

brucek wrote: ↑May 20th, 2024, 5:54 am
alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 20th, 2024, 2:25 am Section 2 is Ready for PL! if someone would check it for me
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_02_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
3.59
Section 2 is PL OK, Alan.

Thanks Bruce

nighthawks · Post by **nighthawks** » May 20th, 2024, 8:22 am

Here is Section 46. Gypsies Travelling.

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowerseofevil_46_baudelaire_128kb.mp3

01:27

ccam · Post by **ccam** » May 20th, 2024, 5:38 pm

alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 20th, 2024, 2:24 am
ccam wrote: ↑May 19th, 2024, 3:48 pm Here is Section 42
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_42_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
Duration: 01:11
I have marked this PL OK! as the text is correct, but I had to make some adjustments and clean off the background noise which was considerable. For future recordings you could try reducing the background noise yourself.

Thank you for your feedback. I'll add that step in for future recordings

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 20th, 2024, 11:54 pm

nighthawks wrote: ↑May 20th, 2024, 8:22 am Here is Section 46. Gypsies Travelling.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowerseofevil_46_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
01:27

Hi Alan
Just 1 PL note for section 46:
- at 1.04 the text is And makes the rocks run water for this throng but I hear And makes the rocks run water for this throne
- also the filename is misspelt, please correct this when you re-upload.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 21st, 2024, 12:18 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 17th, 2024, 11:35 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_33_baudelaire_128kb.mp3 2:25

Hi Adiran
Sorry, but although I passed section 33 as PL OK! I have noticed on relistening a minor misread:

at 1.30 the text is But till your dreams without release but I hear But still your dreams

It is optional for you if you want to correct this but I know you like to get things right.
My apologies

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » May 21st, 2024, 1:33 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 21st, 2024, 12:18 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 17th, 2024, 11:35 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_33_baudelaire_128kb.mp3 2:25
Hi Adiran
Sorry, but although I passed section 33 as PL OK! I have noticed on relistening a minor misread:

at 1.30 the text is But till your dreams without release but I hear But still your dreams

It is optional for you if you want to correct this but I know you like to get things right.
My apologies

No problem, Alan. Here's the updated version: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_33_baudelaire_128kb.mp3

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 21st, 2024, 11:03 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 21st, 2024, 1:33 am No problem, Alan. Here's the updated version: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_33_baudelaire_128kb.mp3

Thanks Adrian, this is now PL OK! for the second time

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 21st, 2024, 12:39 pm

Section 40 is Ready for PL if someone would check it for me

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_40_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
2.50

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » May 21st, 2024, 10:27 pm

alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 21st, 2024, 12:39 pm Section 40 is Ready for PL if someone would check it for me

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_40_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
2.50

Hello Alan,
Section 40 is PL OK.

Nicely read, but a weird poem.

Regards,
Adrian

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 21st, 2024, 10:42 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 21st, 2024, 10:27 pm Section 40 is PL OK.
Nicely read, but a weird poem.

Thanks Adrian

I think it may be a reference to Dante's Beatrice but I don't know Dante's work well enough to be sure.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 22nd, 2024, 3:01 am

Section 29 is Ready for PL! if someone will check it for me

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_29_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
3.27

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » May 22nd, 2024, 3:11 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 22nd, 2024, 3:01 am Section 29 is Ready for PL! if someone will check it for me

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/flowersofevil_29_baudelaire_128kb.mp3
3.27

Hello Alan,
Optional PL note
at 1:52 you pronounce "Belleau" as bell-yer, I think it might be as in "bell-low" to rhyme with the previous line.

Otherwise PL OK.
Regards,
Adrian