Hi Jennifer! Great job with both sections 17 and 18. The only edits I noted were to correct the intro and outros. Instead of saying "Section 17" or "Section 18", the intros and outros should be:
Section 17
Intro - "Chapter 9 Part 1 of The Home Acre ."
Outro - "End of Chapter 9, Part 1"
Section 18
Intro - "Chapter 9 Part 2 of The Home Acre ."
Outro - "End of Chapter 9, Part 2" (followed by the end of book outro as you've already got there).
I apologize for overlooking that earlier when I PLd Section 17. I've updated the original comment on the thread, but also included it here just in case you don't get notified of updates to comments.
Thanks!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
I always get anxious about intros and outros when they are complex . Gives me a frisson of uncertainty when i approach them. So i never mind being corrected .An easy fix anyway
Hi Josh,
They are all yours.
Thank you for claiming!
-Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
I always get anxious about intros and outros when they are complex . Gives me a frisson of uncertainty when i approach them. So i never mind being corrected .An easy fix anyway
Jennifer
And these are both now Spot PL OK! Thanks!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
alg1001 wrote: ↑May 8th, 2024, 4:47 am
Hi Jared,
Thank you for Section 1!
-Amy
Absolutely,
I've just realized I made a mistake and have recorded both sections 1 and 2 of chapter one and compiled and introduced them as if they are just section 1. I will edit this up and resubmit hopefully this evening with both sections complete.
Hi Jared,
No problem at all.
Thank you for these and for the quick turnaround!
-Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
Hello Jared! Welcome to LV, and congrats on your first few recordings! I enjoyed listening to your recordings, as you have a very pleasant tone and a nice cadence when speaking. The content for each section is good to go, but I do you to add 5 seconds of silence at the end of each section.
Example: "End of Chapter 1, part 1" <leave 5 seconds of silence then end recording>
Example: "End of Chapter 1, part 2" <leave 5 seconds of silence then end recording>
Once these updates are made, please re-upload the files (under the same names) and post them in this thread along with the new run times. I can then do a quick spot check to make sure all is good. Thank you!
~Traveling May 20-29. I will catch up upon my return for any PLs, etc.~
Cheers, Claire I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Hello Jared! Welcome to LV, and congrats on your first few recordings! I enjoyed listening to your recordings, as you have a very pleasant tone and a nice cadence when speaking. The content for each section is good to go, but I do you to add 5 seconds of silence at the end of each section.
Example: "End of Chapter 1, part 1" <leave 5 seconds of silence then end recording>
Example: "End of Chapter 1, part 2" <leave 5 seconds of silence then end recording>
Once these updates are made, please re-upload the files (under the same names) and post them in this thread along with the new run times. I can then do a quick spot check to make sure all is good. Thank you!
Thanks so much for the kind feedback. Will get that fixed up and re-uploaded ASAP.
