COMPLETE [Mystic Philosphy] The Initiates of the Flame by Manly P. Hall - rr

[BrotherMichael]

Ok thanks for the feedback.

[Cbteddy]

Uploaded corrected versions. of sections 0, 1, and 2.

Section 2 -nicely done! Very interesting about how the lotus transformed into the rose for symbolism.

Just a few edits please:

Ending - slight shuffling sound right at the end of the recording (8:48). Perhaps you can replace that with another second of complete silence.

Around 6:28 - stumble on "and only when he sends upward nourishment..."

Around 4:50 - stumble on "and it is to this point in himself that the student is striving to rise."

Around 1:05 - stumble on "said to have lived high on the top of a mountain."

Great job with the edits! Spot PL OK!

[Cbteddy]

Section 4 is also spot PL OK. Great job with the edits on both chapters. My role as your DPL is now complete, and you're pretty much done as well. Your BC, Redrun, will be along to advise if anything else is needed.

Great job with your first solo! You have a very nice tone and pacing within your recording. I look forward to PLing your recordings on future projects!

[redrun]

Alright! This is the part where I begin the process of sending this off to the catalog! I'll have to begin tomorrow, and I expect to be back eith the news that it's complete, sometime tomorrow evening.

[BrotherMichael]

Thanks to both of you!

[redrun]

And, here's that expected news!

This project is now complete. All audio files can be found in our catalog:
https://librivox.org/the-initiates-of-the-flame-by-manly-p-hall/

Congrats on your first solo reading, BrotherMichael, and I hope you'll be back for more!

[BrotherMichael]

Thank you. Already have a list of others I’d like to do. Appreciate the help and feedback