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by brucek » April 28th, 2024, 6:39 am
Hi Alan,
Yours is PL OK.
Bruce.
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by alanmapstone » April 28th, 2024, 6:44 am
brucek wrote: ↑ April 28th, 2024, 6:39 am
Yours is PL OK.
Thanks Bruce
Alan
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by svonb002 » April 28th, 2024, 10:38 am
Hello. May I claim section 9?
~ Stefan V.
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by alanmapstone » April 28th, 2024, 11:59 am
svonb002 wrote: ↑ April 28th, 2024, 10:38 am
Hello. May I claim section 9?
Section 9 assigned
Thanks Stefan
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by brucek » April 29th, 2024, 7:23 pm
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by alanmapstone » April 30th, 2024, 12:44 am
Both PL OK!
As one Byromaniac to another, thank you
Alan
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by alanmapstone » April 30th, 2024, 7:48 am
Alan
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czandra
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by czandra » May 1st, 2024, 6:31 am
ss. 18 & 8 please
I'll also check 7.
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by czandra » May 1st, 2024, 6:39 am
Alan, section 7 is okay, except you omitted "I" at about 1:24 "I once more..."
Cz
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by czandra » May 1st, 2024, 7:08 am
Je lis à haute voix car refléchir fait trop de bruit!
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by alanmapstone » May 1st, 2024, 8:12 am
Thanks Czandra
These are Ready for PL! and thank you for checking section 7
Alan
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by alanmapstone » May 1st, 2024, 10:13 am
PL note for section 8:
The text is correct and I will assume the Greek lines are right as I cannot check them
However can you please resubmit using the short intro/outro specified for Subsequent Sections.
Alan
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Imago
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by Imago » May 1st, 2024, 2:08 pm
Could I read sections 12 and 13 please? Thanks.
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by alanmapstone » May 1st, 2024, 6:03 pm
Imago wrote: ↑ May 1st, 2024, 2:08 pm
Could I read sections 12 and 13 please? Thanks.
Sections Assigned
Thank you!
Alan
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by alanmapstone » May 1st, 2024, 8:04 pm
PL notes for section 18:
The text is correct and well read
Please resubmit with the shorter intro/outro.
Please remove the prose introduction which I asked not to be included.
Alan
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