mleigh wrote: ↑April 24th, 2024, 5:25 pm
Two more, excellently done chapters. I like Lordy Brown. He is a character.
Both chapters are PL OK.
Thanks,
M
Thanks. Though the co-incidences are improbable (like how often he stumbles into Mary Dane!), Lordy is important to the story. Here are a couple more chapters, though please don't feel any rush:
mleigh wrote: ↑April 24th, 2024, 5:25 pm
Two more, excellently done chapters. I like Lordy Brown. He is a character.
Both chapters are PL OK.
Thanks,
M
Thanks. Though the co-incidences are improbable (like how often he stumbles into Mary Dane!), Lordy is important to the story. Here are a couple more chapters, though please don't feel any rush:
I added 1s to Ch 8 and marked it for "spot PL". I have a couple of more that I'm should be able to upload later this evening. The weather (and bird watching) are improving every day though
I'm not quite sure I understand Staines' infatuation with Mary Dane. Tommy is easier to absorb, because he doesn't impress me with being particularly sharp. But I'm willing to suspend disbelief for the sake of the story, which is rollicking
ASharma wrote: ↑April 25th, 2024, 6:57 pm
I'm not quite sure I understand Staines' infatuation with Mary Dane. Tommy is easier to absorb, because he doesn't impress me with being particularly sharp. But I'm willing to suspend disbelief for the sake of the story, which is rollicking
I'll be travelling later this week, though I may get another 1-2 chapters done before I leave. But you shouldn't feel rushed, as there will likely be a week where I don't manage any new recordings. I will also be slow in revising.
ASharma wrote: ↑April 28th, 2024, 4:49 pm
I'll be travelling later this week, though I may get another 1-2 chapters done before I leave. But you shouldn't feel rushed, as there will likely be a week where I don't manage any new recordings. I will also be slow in revising.
ASharma wrote: ↑April 28th, 2024, 4:49 pm
I'll be travelling later this week, though I may get another 1-2 chapters done before I leave. But you shouldn't feel rushed, as there will likely be a week where I don't manage any new recordings. I will also be slow in revising.
ASharma wrote: ↑April 30th, 2024, 10:54 am
The mystery deepens, just as his judgement is seriously skewed by his infatuation. There's a lot riding on his faith in Mary!
Hi! I hope you had a good week. It will likely be a few days before I am able to resume recording, but Chapter 19 was in the pipeline and includes an unexpected twist. So I thought I should upload it sooner rather than later