FULL (DR) The Story of The Treasure Seekers (dramatic version)- rr

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Here is Narrator Chapter 13:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_narrator_13.mp3

Time 30:03

Also there are some omissions of assigned parts in Chapter 13:

The first is on Page 19:

"Then he said, ‘Let’s put up the shutters. It never rains but it pours. Now you’ve had two burglars I daresay you’ll have twenty.’ So we put up the shutters, which Eliza has strict orders to do before she goes out, only she never does, and we went back to Father’s study, and the robber said, ‘What a night we are having!’ and put his boots back in the fender to go on steaming, and then we all talked at once. It was the most wonderful adventure we ever had, though it wasn’t treasure-seeking—at least not ours. I suppose it was the...)
The one in green should have been read by Mr. Foulkes (the robber).

And on Page 20:

"And then there was the click of the gate, and we said, ‘Here’s Father,’ and the robber said, ‘And now for the police.’"
The one bold and underlined should be said by all of the children, and the one in green, again by Mr. Foulkes (the robber).
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Hello,

My section is still listed as assigned.

Post by StaceyM2022 » April 8th, 2024, 10:47 pm

Hello,

Here is Mr. Rosenbaum's Boy. - 16 seconds

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_mrrosenbaumsboy_09.mp3

Thanks,
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StaceyM2022 wrote: May 5th, 2024, 9:52 pm My section is still listed as assigned.
Thank you Stacey, I've sent a PM to our Book Coordinator.

In the meantime, I've marked this one role as Ready for PL. I see that we have several more waiting as well.
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adrianstephens wrote: March 25th, 2024, 3:32 am
Bookworm360 wrote: March 15th, 2024, 7:20 am H.O Chapter 1 sounds good except for one point: Did the H.O reader have to read the lines in color below, because they're not there. Otherwise, it's PL OK.

But he told me afterwards he had been dreaming that they really
_had_ come to eat H. O., and it couldn’t have been the pudding, when you come to think of it, because it was so very plain.



Chapter 7 is missing the line "Now you're a prisoner really and truly!"

In Chapter 8 "A DREADFUL WARNING. A wicked boy told me a very instructive thing about ginger. They had opened one of the large jars, and he happened to take out quite a lot, and he made it all right by dropping marbles in, till there was as much ginger as before. But he told me that on the Sunday, when it was coming near the part where there is only juice generally, I had no idea what his feelings were. I don’t see what he could have said when they asked him. I should be sorry to act like it." is marked as H.O's, but the line isn't in the recording. And there's an extra "Chapter 6 by H.O" at the end, but that doesn't signify for editing purposes.

Same issue with Chapter 12, the line "One dose gives immediate relief. It will cure your cold in one bottle" is also marked as H.O's but missing.

Everything else PL OK! Nice reading adrianstephens! :clap:
Thank you for your kind words.

Here are the corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_01.mp3 (line inserted at 22s)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_07.mp3 (line inserted at 9s)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_08.mp3 (line inserted at 22s)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_12.mp3 (line inserted at 15s)

All corrected and PL OK! Thank you.
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