[SOLO]Moonraker by F Tennyson Jesse - brrot

Post by **brownrottger** » March 22nd, 2024, 7:10 am

Great job! Very enjoyable listening.

Section 2 has the same problem. Please add "Chapter 3 and 4" just before "Chapter 3 In which...."

Also in the end of this recording, you need to say "end of Section 2" instead of "end of Chapter 4"

Section 3 Please add "Chapters 5 and 6 " just before "Chapter 5 In which...."

Also in the end of this recording, you need to say "end of Section 3" instead of "end of Chapter 6"

Thanks!
Christine

mycatmissesme · Post by **mycatmissesme** » March 31st, 2024, 3:25 pm

I've made the corrections to sections 2 and 3, and uploaded sections 4 and 5.

I can't find the pencil you mention in the first post, to amend the summary. Maybe it's visible to PL volunteers but not readers...?

Post by **brownrottger** » March 31st, 2024, 3:59 pm

mycatmissesme wrote: ↑March 31st, 2024, 3:25 pm I've made the corrections to sections 2 and 3, and uploaded sections 4 and 5.

I can't find the pencil you mention in the first post, to amend the summary. Maybe it's visible to PL volunteers but not readers...?

These are in line for PL. The edit (pencil) icon is the same one that is the first in the line of them at the top right of each post. The only time it doesn't show there is if you are not signed in. I could do it for you, if you want.
Best,
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » April 1st, 2024, 1:54 pm

Sections 2-5 are PL ok. Very well read. I looove the last line in text of Section 5!

mycatmissesme · Post by **mycatmissesme** » April 2nd, 2024, 6:45 am

Found the pencil. Thanks.

Post by **brownrottger** » April 2nd, 2024, 1:42 pm

mycatmissesme wrote: ↑April 2nd, 2024, 6:45 am Found the pencil. Thanks.

Post by **brownrottger** » April 24th, 2024, 10:04 am

Sorry for the delay in PL. I will get right on this. In future, will you please post here when you put another Section in the MW for PL? That is the best way for me to know asap.
Thanks!
Christine

Post by **brownrottger** » April 24th, 2024, 10:55 am

Section 6. Optional to say "End of Section 6" as the outro instead of "End of Chapter 12" to keep it consistent with the previous.
Section 7. Optional to say "End of Section 7" as the outro instead of "End of Chapter 14" to keep it consistent with the previous.
Section 8. Optional to say "End of Section 8" as the outro instead of "End of Chapter 16" to keep it consistent with the previous.

I have marked these PL ok since the edits are optional.
Thanks!